By Alcreator Litt Dear
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Be wise, good, above all.
Be not black to be immoral.
Breathe live naturally moral.
Be light, simple, straight, righteous natural.
Be fair, act like a wise mortal.
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Breathe live mean to express breathe to live/breathe life to live No, this is not a contest entry poem Yes, this is a traditional Tanka poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables Theme: Unwise living is always challenged, God gifts man life for He wishes man may go for making and maintaining a natural, moral, wise and meaningful living and experience a living that God expects from man Wisdom gets evaluated during life (in course of your living) and after (after you die or when you are no more on this earth) Black means to refer black/dark/ignorant/foolish/illiterate or unwise living Immoral means not moral A wise mortal means a wise mortal man/ a wise man Picture borrowed free download from internet Thank you for reading and writing a fair or wise review |
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