Eyes on You
Tommy tries to rescue their family.
by Mistydawn
Horrid news turns Tommy's world upside down.
Chapter 1
The Beginning of the End
Posted January 1, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy and his crew try to pull off the biggest job yet.
Chapter 2
The Big Heist
Posted January 5, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Plans go haywire when unexpected guests arrive.
Chapter 3
Unexpected Visitors
Posted January 9, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy and Kirk try to get themselfs out of trouble.
Chapter 4
Confronting Danger
Posted January 14, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Find out how Tommy and Jen began
Chapter 5
Finding Love
Posted January 19, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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A look into Jen and Tommy's relationship.
Chapter 6
First Date
Posted January 21, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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The dectivies discover they have the wrong suspects.
Chapter 7
Unsuspecting Accomplices
Posted January 23, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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The robbery doesn't turn out the way Tommy hopes.
Chapter 8
Failed plans
Posted January 26, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy discovers something that can changes his plan.
Chapter 9
Unbelievable Discovery
Posted January 30, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy's narrow escape leads him to another harrowing event.
Chapter 10
Nine Lives
Posted February 2, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy begs for his life.
Chapter 11
Final Plea
Posted February 5, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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An intruder changes Tommy's quest
Chapter 12
Change of Plans
Posted February 8, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy is overwhelmed by his situation.
Chapter 13
Meltdown
Posted February 11, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Jen's grave situation takes a turn for the worse.
Chapter 14
From Bad to Worse
Posted February 14, 2019General / Fiction
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The Berryville Pd is trying to locate Tommy
Chapter 15
The Hunt
Posted February 17, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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The Berryvillle Pd is closing in
Chapter 16
Evading the Law
Posted February 20, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Jen recieves horrific news.
Chapter 17
Hard Truth
Posted February 24, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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The robbery crew attempt to outrun the law
Chapter 18
Defeated
Posted February 27, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy continues to run from the law.
Chapter 19
On the Move
Posted March 3, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Cornered at the park, Tommy tries to flee one last time.
Chapter 20
The Great Escape
Posted March 6, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy continues to run from the law.
Chapter 21
Nowhere to Run
Posted March 10, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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Tommy has to make a tough choices, his freedom or his life.
Chapter 22
Tommy's Final Stand
Posted March 13, 2019Mystery and Crime / Fiction
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