The language used and how the words were put together was for me as a reader a sustain message with such a particular punch...
At that age, sometimes all we can do is hope. Great entry.
This speaks of fire's destruction and yet gives hope of an awakening aftermath
An approach unique among the entries. It points out that fire is often a regenerative force.
Gotta vote for the poetry on a poetry site, no?
Lovely vivid imagery. Well done.
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