I love it. So many good lines here. I particularly like: "tread nearer to the dark iniquity" and "Neath all the grandeur barren seeds it plants" Very nice. I like the spiritual theme hiding in the beautiful words.
"Resist the devil and he shall flee from you"
but please Lord, "Lead us not into temptation." Lots of nice poems here, but this is by far the best.
Best flow
a classy poem about an unclassy theme- well ddone and not sing songy!
Read all the entries and this one kept me captivated through to the twist in the ending.
Funny, but I think you could use a much larger...well, you know.
Perfect interpretation of prompt!
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