Like you said "Words can't tell", it IS hard to explain the relationship, but you described it well. God is SO GOOD! He is LORD. God bless! Great poem! 29-Nov-2013

I really, really like this poem!Especially the distinct ABAB rhyme, it adds a lot to the words. I like the whole poem and how it flows from thought to thought. Good Job! God bless you. ~Sarah 29-Nov-2013

wow! That is an amazing way to put it! He IS the perfect Builder! And He's also building a mansion for us in heaven. There are some parts that do not flow all the way or rhyme perfectly, but that is ok. Good job! 08-Nov-2013

Wonderful! I like the following of your word choice: Batches, Assortment, Restricted. The rhyme is good and it flows well when read aloud. Good job! 21-Oct-2013

That is a really sweet poem! The lines flow well without rhyme. Great diction chosen to make this poem vibrant. The picture fits well. Wonderful poem! 19-Oct-2013

Well chosen words, when there can only be seven. Your words describe the picture well. It is so sad that there are homeless children. 09-Oct-2013

Thank you for having this poem being shared by myself, fans and other readers/writers. I enjoyed this poem very much. All of your rhymes are done very well and neither of them were strained, forced or labored. The versus rhythm and tempo was done so well that it made it very easy to me to understand your poem. Yes I am sure that with the Lord's help all fears can be erased. You have a good one and God bless.
AK 26-Sep-2013

Thank you for having this poem being shared by myself, fans and other readers/writers. I enjoyed this poem very much. All of your rhymes are done very well and neither of them were strained, forced or labored. The versus rhythm and tempo was done so well that it made it very easy to me to understand your poem. Yes I am sure that with the Lord's help all fears can be erased. You have a good one and God bless.
AK 26-Sep-2013

Thank you sir for sharing this with myself, fans and other readers. The picture that you have chosen is heavenly and compliments your poem very much. Your broken English works very well and it makes your writing very real as it expresses what the boy in the picture is writing. The imagery is also very well and it creates a vision of what the boy is thinking. You have a good one in God bless. I enjoyed reading your poem very much.
AK 13-Sep-2013

Great rhyme and beat. Flowed well when I read it. The last stanza is so true, and the words well chosen. The picture fits well with the title of the poem. 10-Sep-2013