12-Sep-2011
It sounds as if you like my poem, rachgalla. Did you mean to give the poem only a four? None of my "own voice" is in the poem. It is composed only of cliches. Your rating of four negated the overall rating of six. But welcome to FS.
Sally
For the review on Whatever by S.Yocom
I smiled the entire time I read this. It flowed easily and worked well read out loud. If I could give a critique it would be that it could have used a bit more of your voice interpersed within the differant cliches. 12-Sep-2011



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