Glad you revised before this went to voting--with an image and a few edits! Stellar job! Get it? Stellar? (I know, I AM corny!)--now I think you're in the running for a win, place or show!--Karenina 03-Nov-2020

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. Well done. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck! 02-Nov-2020

very good nomi338, nice rhyme, rhythm, and so very clear. i actually had one one start off this way. Thank God he changed to the good and is so amassing now. 16-Oct-2020

The boat anchored there all filled with supplies and ready to go, at first looks like a pretty good deal. Then you see the fire hydrant and you realize there's a whole town under the water? Doesn't sound quite as appealing now,
Patty 04-Oct-2020

I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, are perfect match i'm trying to stop laughing as i read your few lines .
It reminds me how our world thinks now.
Cookie 04-Oct-2020

Not being a fisherman, your idea alludes my own personal experience. However, you shared how it should be - good neighbors are right! Good photo accompanies your contest entry. 04-Oct-2020

This is an excellent entry in this nature 5/7/5 contest, you've made a very good case in this great narrative in this contest, beautifully written, well done, blessings and good luck, blessing Roy 04-Oct-2020

This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear onray! I think you have successfully managed to convey the feeling of renorse.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x 04-Oct-2020

This is a wonderful rhyming heartfelt poem, one that in reality touches all of us, even the most hardened, for no one can ever say all that they want to say or mean always what they want to mean throughout a life, because of various complications, twisting and turnings, therefore, there should never be any regrets on someone's passing when the observer is sincere in wanting to forgive, love, and make amends. God sees all, is in charge of all, and sustains all. giovanni 03-Oct-2020

Nicely written. I enjoyed reading your poem and it flowed beautifully. One suggestion, if I may. The title of your poem says "goodby" it should be spelt "goodbye" all the best PM 03-Oct-2020