you are the only one i will review tonight --- just wanted to be sure you were still here and am thrilled to find new/recent postings from you ...hope i can become more of a regular here again soon ....ya gotta knowz i luvz yaz! XX HH 01-Jan-2013
I agree with previous knowing reviewers ... superb story - exceptional meter and rhyme ... wish I was on the committee -- winner in my book for certain. Be BIG proud of this. Lea Ann 27-Jun-2012
this makes me itch ... and reach for insecticide ... and well, move. Which makes it a really great and visual and emotional poem. Now, get outta there and get some sun ... Hee? GREAT, honest Dale. lea 25-Jun-2012
I LOVE the Mist of Love line ending with missed .... and well, of course allllllll the rest of it as well and even more. Yer really sumfin gal. Enjoy your vaca and lemme know when that new baby boy arrives! XO 02-Jun-2012
Lea thanks doll for this fabulous review.......yes you understood this one so well....thanks so much for taking time to review and enjoy:)
Hugs
Maureen
Ahhhhh, the Prom --- a celebrated, anticipated right of passage per se into womanhood, and yet a loss of childhood ... how we mothers or our mothers or when they are mothers even endure such is a tribute beyond merit. Superb doll ... Superb. Lea 23-May-2012
Hey Lea, can you imagine how I was??? LOL she's my eldest, and all I kept hearing was "oh mum not again"....tears and more tears....lol
Thanks girl for reading and enjoying this one.:)
Enjoy your week.
Hugs
Maureen
OK -- I was already blubbering from then last one ... pretty relentless ain'tcha? Just joshin ... you and munchin obviously got it all going on and on. Grats doll ... XO 23-May-2012
I thoroughly enjoyed your advice to the new bride.
Love your play on words throughout the piece.
Well done, my friend.
Hugs,d 23-May-2012
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reply by the author on 20-May-2012
AHHHHHHHHH, Phooey .... now I'm gonna get all teary like and start sniffelin .... I never know how to express my gratitude to someone who feels my writings are worthy of a 6 .... but hope you know that it means lots and tons. Thank you ... Thank you. XO Lea
I was just about to slide off my chair laughing at your trip down memory lane via google --- till the end, of course. This is perfect. Ta heck wit sillibells ... this rocks. Lea 21-May-2012
if there is anyone who does not openly or secretly believe in fairies and unicorns, I don't want to meet them ...hee? This is magical gal, WELL DONE! Lea 21-May-2012