falling_survivor: I'm turning out the lights.. Trying to fall asleep.. but everytime... I jump off my bed.. Back upon my feet Somethings in my room.. I can feel it now and then But trying my best.. ..to get it off my head.. A while passed away.. ..and i hear a tiny laugh As i turn around, I see you love.. ..standing against my bed.. My fear ran away... ...as i saw your sparkling face.. I held you by the neck.. ..and pulled you down to my face... We kissed till our breath ran away.. And you promised.. ..never to push me away... The night gave its word to keep us together... ..for eternity.. And we promised to keep the word even after death... Since then there was no power... ..strong enough.. To pull us away... |
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falling_survivor: Hey, hey turn around.. Did you feel the same... ..when you took a round? Make a sound...make a sound ..to make me feel the way... You are feeling now.. I got to know you are happy.. ..so am i now.. But...a little while ago.. ..i was sobbing on the ground.. I turned around to see you... ..but i could see that you were gone.. You tossed me into the emptiness... ..back where i belong... I tried to climb up.. ..but i failed to come out... And thats when i knew.. ..its over for me now... Its rather better... to stop thinking for now... I knew nothing was gonna change.. ..so its better to end myself right now.... Thats when i decided to blank out my sky And with the bless of the stars.. I leaped out to die... |
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falling_survivor: I hear a voice inside my head.. It asks me to take a..step.. Against the pull of the blackest holes.. But i don't wanna go back.. I had a hope.. ..a hope of life... I had a chance.. ..a chance to live... ......BUT..... ...its gone... So why should i listen?... and...ask for second chance?.. I couldn't live once...then why live twice? ...so i take a step... ..towards..but...against... The embrace of life... Felt a pain...and fell off.. ...in the center... ...of life and death... Stuck forever...with no way out... Screaming for help...with no response... So i wait...for the time.. ...and my fate.... The only ones who didn't abandon me.. ...To choose my destiny.... |
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falling_survivor: A night.. ..thats all it takes.. Comeon love dont die yet... Cause i wanna die...before you thats how it was supposed to be... please let me fade away...into emptiness... ..i am too scared to live with what i have... ..inside me... i am too broken to exist... ....oh...please help me... ...or let me die.. i cant take the pain anymore... ...i wanna fade away into a hollow... ..and wait for you to come.... ....and live for you after death... |
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Comeon love dont die yet... Cause i wanna die...before you i am too scared to live with what i have and the very best line: .i wanna fade away into a hollow wow, that is some wicked imagery in that line. this poem rocks. the opening is cool too. A night...thats all it takes. awesome. - | ||
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falling_survivor: ...i am falling down...cant take it anymore...tried my best to survive...but it wasn't enough...i am weak...i am sick...i am tired of this life....wanna die...wanna fly....fly off to the sky......but i am falling down...i am going down....to the depth of blackness....i cant see the sky anymore....and i know....i never will.....and till the end of the fall....i will just be a...falling survivor.... |
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