nancy_e_davis
04-May-2021
Review For Rainy Day
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What a surprise to see one of my old friend's name in my messages. I'm afraid you have been over medicated, Bob.
Check those pills out. Benadryl I'd bet since it's Spring! What a joy to know you are still with us. Have a wonderful day and write me a poem! Nancy:)


Michael Ludwinder
03-May-2021
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I read this and ... read it again. I thought the message was powerful in your poem especially if you take time to really think about it. Very creative and interesting.


kmoss
23-Jan-2021
Review For Commando
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Hahaha. What a clever use of a few short lines. Definitely an original poem, extra points for originality. I thought most people went commando due to it being laundry day, but you shed some light on another reason. Thanks for the giggle.


Taurus the Elder
22-Jan-2021
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Very good. As a fellow commando I can relate. Short and to the point, easy read. Supported very well by the art work. Did you notice the
title on the art work? Liberation. It fits perfectly. Great job, wishing you continued success.


Bill Schott
06-Dec-2020
Review For Oxygen
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This 3-5-3, Oxygen, has the proper formatting and gives the readers a first hand opinion on bottled oxygen as a necessity for living. Reviewed with blinders on.


ESOSTINE
06-Dec-2020
Review For Oxygen
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You did say it all. No man-made thing is a perfect replacement for the gift of nature but an aid to support life. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and may you find the needed relief and consolation. Reviewed with blinders on.


equestrik
06-Dec-2020
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Your have presented a good truth here in the writing and put it together with a well chosen picture. I have also hear of oxygen bars. Best of luck to you in the contest. Reviewed with blinders on.


Patty Palmer
06-Dec-2020
Review For Oxygen
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You make a good point telling people not to smoke and you are telling them from a realistic point of view. Sorry that you have to be on oxygen. I have oxygen toom but my oxygen level stays nice and high but I have asthma and when I get sick it goes down. Good luck with the contest!
Patty Reviewed with blinders on.


Gypsy Blue Rose
06-Dec-2020
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Hello anonymous

Great entry for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation works well. The topic about bottled air.... oxygen? Is a fine choice. Good luck in the contest. Reviewed with blinders on.


Wendy G
06-Dec-2020
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Very significant words, particularly coming from your own personal experience. Well written, and it meets the syllable requirements, so best wishes for the contest. Reviewed with blinders on.



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