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The Carpenter's Son by emrpoems

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wow! That is an amazing way to put it! He IS the perfect Builder! And He's also building a mansion for us in heaven. There are some parts that do not flow all the way or rhyme perfectly, but that is ok. Good job!
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 08-Nov-2013

The Price was Paid by Dougspoetry

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I really, really like this poem!Especially the distinct ABAB rhyme, it adds a lot to the words. I like the whole poem and how it flows from thought to thought. Good Job! God bless you. ~Sarah
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 03-Nov-2013

If Wishes Came in Batches by adewpearl

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Wonderful! I like the following of your word choice: Batches, Assortment, Restricted. The rhyme is good and it flows well when read aloud. Good job!
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 21-Oct-2013

Wedding Day by annatberry

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That is a really sweet poem! The lines flow well without rhyme. Great diction chosen to make this poem vibrant. The picture fits well. Wonderful poem!
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 19-Oct-2013
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Drops of His Love by Dougspoetry

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Like you said "Words can't tell", it IS hard to explain the relationship, but you described it well. God is SO GOOD! He is LORD. God bless! Great poem!
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 19-Oct-2013

Homeless Child by sweetwoodjax

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Well chosen words, when there can only be seven. Your words describe the picture well. It is so sad that there are homeless children.
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 09-Oct-2013

The tides of Time by adewpearl

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Great rhyme and beat. Flowed well when I read it. The last stanza is so true, and the words well chosen. The picture fits well with the title of the poem.
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 10-Sep-2013

Pax by alexgardiner

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Great! I like it. I like that you read it. It flows nicely and has a good rhyme. Yes children are innocent it's sad for me to see them be taught the wrong things.
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 07-Sep-2013

The Wait by livelylinda

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I'm so sorry. I'm praying for you now. This poem was well-written and is very descriptive. I like the format, flow, and rhyme too. God Bless. Sarah
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 06-Sep-2013

Ayla at Two, Mommy Will Do by Suzarb

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Wow, that is a very descriptive and easy to picture, poem. I could just see it happening. Good flow even without a specific rhyme. Good job!
Comment Written by Sarah Rudolph on 06-Sep-2013
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