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Whatever by S.Yocom

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I smiled the entire time I read this. It flowed easily and worked well read out loud. If I could give a critique it would be that it could have used a bit more of your voice interpersed within the differant cliches.
Comment Written by rachgalla on 12-Sep-2011


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