5-7-5 Write a 5-7-5 Poem! This is a poem with only three lines. The catch is there is a strict syllable count. The first line has 5 syllables, second 7, third 5 again. See an example and details in the announcement.
I smiled the entire time I read this. It flowed easily and worked well read out loud. If I could give a critique it would be that it could have used a bit more of your voice interpersed within the differant cliches.
It sounds as if you like my poem, rachgalla. Did you mean to give the poem only a four? None of my "own voice" is in the poem. It is composed only of cliches. Your rating of four negated the overall rating of six. But welcome to FS.