Sense of Place Short Story Write a 400 to 700 word essay describing a place. This should be a descriptive short story, make sure you describe the place very well. This place you are describing can not be a place in your imagination, dreams, ext. It has to be a real place, preferably a place you know very well. You do not have to have been to this place, and this can be a made up story. Be creative and descriptive!
I smiled the entire time I read this. It flowed easily and worked well read out loud. If I could give a critique it would be that it could have used a bit more of your voice interpersed within the differant cliches.
It sounds as if you like my poem, rachgalla. Did you mean to give the poem only a four? None of my "own voice" is in the poem. It is composed only of cliches. Your rating of four negated the overall rating of six. But welcome to FS.