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Twenty Times a Thousand Dawns by adewpearl

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Only you could capture such imagery in a blank
verse. It is so difficult for people like me.
I appreciate your gift and sharing and will
always keep your works close to me.
I will be taking a little break from Fanstory..
just a breather to attend to matters at home.
I will miss you for a short while.
Regards,
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 02-Nov-2013

Zen Meditation by Joan E.

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I am curious as to whether you found the picture
or formed the words first. This is delightful and
so meaningful.
You do have a way with words, girl, and I am learning
a bunch of stuff from you.
This is smooth flowing and beautiful.
My best.
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 02-Nov-2013

A Worm is Boring Through the Ground by adewpearl

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I am not a big fan of Halloween, because it is
too scary...like this poem. You do have a way of
creating tingles up my spine and goosebumps on my
arms.
Oooh, just the thought of a worm crawling all over
my body,makes me cringe.
Good write though.
Regards,
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 30-Oct-2013

Celebration Coupled with Concern by rama devi

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An amazing sight to behold! What beauty lies in
Mother Nature. If one took the time to see and
appreciate the wonders on this earth, they may
take care of it better.
How true are your words, written so artistically,
and beautifully. Painters have tried to duplicate
her essence in their art work. It is our responsibility
to Mother Earth to keep her for generations to come.
Well written. Best of luck.
Love, Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 30-Oct-2013

Leonidas by adewpearl

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OMG!! How fabulous this is. What an award-winning
picture and poem. You are the most talented woman
in my world, Ms Brooke. Thank you for this most
wonderful story. I enjoyed it so very much.
You are a shoo-in for the contest. Who could
possibly match your wits?
Best of luck always.
Marie
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Comment Written by MAMONIA on 29-Oct-2013

Rogue Object Dwarfs Jupiter by Joan E.

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Wow! I was completely taken back when I saw this
photo. What a fabulous picture this is. Your words
are always a lesson for me. You teach me so much
with your fabulous entries.
I've been away to New Jersey to visit grandchildren
and hadn't realized all that I missed.
Best of luck and Congrats for being the Recognized Writer of the Month. You deserve it!!
Lots of love,
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 29-Oct-2013

5-7-5 (at the sushi bar) by AlvinTEthington

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Sure, leave it to you, Alvin. I suspected all along
that you spent a great deal of time at the Sushi Bar.
Very funny indeed!
You did a great job with this little piece and I
enjoyed it thoroughly.
Cat got your tongue?????
Love ya,
Best of luck.
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 28-Oct-2013

Supreme Love by rama devi

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How certainly magnificent this is expressed. Your vision of
love is not to be taken lightly. It is an important element of
life as you describe in this utterly beautiful poem.
I love the imagery, rhythm and flow., the background, font and
picture. Everything together is pure, magical and Love personified.
Best of luck, my dear,
Love,
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 20-Oct-2013

Halloween Warning by adewpearl

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Ooooh! Scary stuff for Halloween. This seems to
be something you always do well every year. I
can just imagine reading this to a youngster and
see them screaming and running in circles to get
as far away as possible.
You surely did it again. What a fantastic write.
Best of luck in the contest.
Regards,
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 14-Oct-2013

Two people in one picture? by misscookie
Chapter 43 of the book The crazy things we do or say

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Was it a double exposure? That is what this
sounds like. How fascinating this had to be.
You certainly were taken back I am sure. I
would have been.
Looking at yourself and seeing a 25 year old
can't be a bad thing, can it?
Sounds great.
Marie
Comment Written by MAMONIA on 14-Oct-2013


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