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for who I truly am by Gungalo

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I have been waiting for the goosebimples to subside, but seems since they may never, decided I might as well try and type. Damn gutsy, heart on the sleeve invitation, gal. Go. XO Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

What A Beautiful Melody by Gungalo

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you must be a poet or sumfin, eh? This is melodic throughout every line, the artwork and colors accent perfectly. LOVED you author's notes. XO Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

I Know There Must Be Unicorns by adewpearl

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if there is anyone who does not openly or secretly believe in fairies and unicorns, I don't want to meet them ...hee? This is magical gal, WELL DONE! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Googled by Glasstruth

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I was just about to slide off my chair laughing at your trip down memory lane via google --- till the end, of course. This is perfect. Ta heck wit sillibells ... this rocks. Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Synchronicity by gclaudy

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Jeepers! what a mouthful that last line is ... sure glad I don't have to read it aloud ... Hee? SUPERB in every way ... best of luck in the voting booths! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Breathe Just Breathe by Jaxpoet

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I think your author's comments sum it up perfectly ... they do, and visa versa. Alot of thought and talent shows here. I appreciate both. Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Hearts Desires by tinams

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I REALLY enjoyed reading this ... both times. I got a warm fuzzy myself ... Ahhhh. This is a goodie ... best of luck in the contest voting! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Religion (Carpetbaggers) by ameen786

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Of course, you couldn't see it, but I just gave you a standing "O"! Gutsy and true and right on the money in the collection plate. Keep em coming! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Traversing the Darkness by Peter Mansson

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lumberjack flannel --- wow! what an excellent visual! Alot like all the other's in this awesome write. no secrets given, no confessions heard ... all superb. Congrats! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012

Short Snort by FrankieXP

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LOVED it --,but you only have 6 sillibelles in line 2 rather than 7 ....
maybe:
That is too often in court

???


Best of luck in the voting booths! Lea
Comment Written by HalfHoff on 21-May-2012


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