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Please, Santa? by IndianaIrish

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I feel this is a very poignant and will written poem that has a very shocking, thought provoking nature to remind all of us not only what Christmas is about, but real wishes are as well.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 21-Dec-2013

Bench Pressing the Fog by Siouxsun

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This poem definitely has an interesting title and I had to read it. Well written and I feel is expresses very well what is experienced with fibromyalgia and relays it to the reader well.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

The Voice by djsaxon

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I found this poem well written and enjoyable, also making very good use of language as well expressing sentiments in regards to writing. Nicely done.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Dear Santa by MoonWillow

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Well written and poignant as well. I feel it serves as a good reminder that for various reasons, people may not have the Christmas sense about them.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Like the wind by Paul Sienicki

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I like this form as well the illustration you use to bolster the poem. Well written and I like the sense that it holds a prayer like thought to conclude it.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Christmas Peace by 4caresmiles

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I enjoyed both the well written poem and the consideration. I also like the dedication and you may want to look for sites or facebook pages that honor servicemen serving overseas and link this to them.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

An Irish Myth Of My Skin by Glasstruth

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I found this poem to be interesting and it kept my attention. Well written, descriptive and I liked the metaphors that you presented.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Benny And The Mouse by EricDaGoose

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I found this to be enjoyable and amusing; well written and a wonderful way to relay a lesson. You also had an interesting corral of characters.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Simple Truths by Righteous Riter

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I found this enjoyable and well written, with some interesting thoughts that you relayed. I liked how you wrapped up the second stanza with the first one about giving.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013

Our History. by New York Poet Q*Q

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"It all comes from public Irresponsibility , who pretends
not to see." No, it comes from an authority that has a hands off policy and dismissively as well a public terrified that if they become involved, they will be the ones who end up in jail. I had no such luxury as a kid and learned my lessons the hard way. Got to thank them for it.

The problem I see with this isn't all the sides fighting, but the fact that one side will beat you with an olive branch you extend to them. Striving for peace at all costs, only creates the most likely chance that there will be a war with terrible costs.

War games with children aren't the problem, as the adults used it to develop a perspective between game and reality, as well understanding limits.

I feel this is a well written and nicely expressive piece.
Comment Written by Mike K2 on 20-Dec-2013


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