Willing Hearts Chapter 10 A
Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?



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Rating of the poem Ars Poetica, too by ~Dovey
Chapter 21 of the book Engaging Growth

Hi Dovey Congratulations and a lovely poem to welcome your little girl Evelyn Grace a sweetie too. It is always nice to write about our children an our hearts are always on our sleeve Enjoy all the little delights
Cheers Chris


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Rating of the script Why I Became a Speech Therapist

Well, you'll never get lonely or have to worry about someone interrupting your conversation because you didn't leave room even to catch your breath. Very well done! Good luck in the contest!
Smiles, Carol


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Rating of the poem Hollow Hills by Mark Jackson

The deep below holds the audience's awe as they know that within this realm, horrors hold your stare. I don't know much about the barrow-downs but I am aware of how many people stop to look at a car accident just to stare at the horror of it all.
It is a sad occurrence in daily life. This rhyming poem speaks about the ideas put forth in the books by JRTolkien. I admit I have never read them but know how influential they are to the many fantasy books and stories outlined in the underworld.
Well-written and spoken as a true believer in things unseen and unheard.
Jesse





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Rating of the poem Complete Silence by royowen

Complete silence can be very refreshing when the world around has been going bonkers and leaving you unhappy. Very good thought, roy!

Should that be please not please?

Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol


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Rating of the book chapter Starry Night on a Broken Road by forestport12
Chapter 7 of the book Love Honor and a Mail Order Bride

Dang! I have no sixes to my name! This is deserving and the best chapter yet.i especially liked this line--
Darkness swallowed Luke whole, as he rested his head on the saddle and watched stars fill the sky.

I have been swallowed whole by darkness. What a great description! Outstanding chapter that left me wanting more.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))


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