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Story Thirteen-Change of Plans #2



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Rating of the poem She brings the beauty.... by royowen

Hi Roy - this is a beautiful little verse dedicated to your granddaughter. I know how you feel as I voice these same sentiments of yours to my granddaughters (and grandsons). They do bring such joy. You are lucky you have her near so you can see her grow and you will always have a close relationship with her. Kind regards Dorothy x


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Air, wind is such an amzing metaphor to use when speaking of faith...go no further than Pentecost and you see my meaning. Here, you've cleverly evoked hope-faith-faith, a trinity of qualities associated with the coming of the spirit. Nice work. Good Luck.


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Rating of the poem I love those magic mornings by Glen Bear Smith

Thisis a very beautiful love poem with a smooth flow of words, making for a very enticing read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.


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Hi Eric - You tell a good story about Edith Cavell - so well written - long AND in verse. You tell it from her birth until her death at the hands of the Germans. Even at school we were told about this brave nurse. I wish I had a 6 as this more than deserves one. Excellent lesson in history for those who have never heard of her. Kind regards Dorothy


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