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Rating of the poem Life (5-7-5 format) by sorcieresue

Happening/transient reality- I love the use of the two here. I'm thinking of a happening in 60's lingo, one giant human be in where reality is transient because it is lived wholly in the now.


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Rating of the book chapter IMAGINATION PRECEDES IT by Jay Squires
Chapter 7 of the book THE TRINING Book Two

Bonding to one's animal is very important. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.


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Rating of the poem My Ceremony

An amazing and brilliant verse. I think this was done on Photoshop, which is effective tool in perfecting the presentation.

This is horrifying, terrifying, graphic and horrific (smile). You've complied with the prompt requirements and then some. An awesome artwork to accompany.

The last two stanzas are particularly powerful.

Best of luck in the contest.


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Rating of the poem Hard to be a God

I imagine being God must be extremely difficult. I can't say I ever really considered it. Knowing everything, being responsible for everything. That would be exhausting.


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Rating of the poem Familiar Territory

Very nice Bill. You have a good scope on depression and being reclusive. So many good lines and phrases here...
Silent screams of torture's den,little lapses lacking judgment,Through tattered drapes I stare, but my favorite..
Sequestered in this dark romance.
GOOD JOB BILL! Nancy



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