Through the eyes of a child Write a short story (100-500 words). The story must include a child's perspective of an object or situation. The story may be told from the viewpoint of the child, or an adult.
Great story and thank you for posting. When I read the sign, I was so happy, love zombie stories, films. You had me gripped the whole way through. Great dialogue and build up! I think my heart was going as fast as theirs towards the end lol Your description of the characters and surroundings, smell etc was good and believable. The friendship between them all and hidden love for Donna was written thoughtfully and nicely done. Their disbelief in Donna doing anything bad at first really shows how much they thought of her, but their fears grew and grew. Thought they was a gonna when she did turned up. Alex :)
some will seek and not know they found him and keep seeking as well. Not an esay thing to do. sometimes I feel so disconeected from everything it's hard to feel conected to god.
Wow Giddy, this is impressive. I have never written a sonnet in my life and after seeing how good yours is, I now know why. Wonderful piece of writing. xoxo Kiwi
A well deserved six stars as its something I say myself. we cant omprove our writing if we aren't told what we are doing wrong and where the errors we've missed are. It is the reason we all need someone to proof read as we usually miss something on our own.
I'd rather someone give me a brutal critique than tickle my ears. Well written, loved the pic. type of poem I'd want to see read out in a creative writing class.
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