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Keep up the good work. You are doing well setting up the mystery surrounding Tom and his situation. I hope that Randy is able to speak to Linda eventually.
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You got the syllable count right and everything I do not know who you are but I am just reviewing so on to reviewing. I love Haikus so much. Nothing is wrong with this haiku. The picture go's great with thie poem.
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:) Hi Walt.
I enjoyed this one. The tone is so soft. It is in itself like a song. Your poems often have a touch of regret in the lines. THis does, but it also offers some acceptance for whatever the regret is.
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I enjoyed your tanka and think your "pivot" line works very effectively. I especially liked your "parasol" metaphor and use of alliteration. Best wishes in the voting booth.
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In think that fact that love doesn't die after death is one ofn the rewards for being a human on this earth. Your words ring true in a beautifully descriptive, compelling poem. Nice even flow an certainly a pleasure to read. Your chouce of artwork is an excellent accompaniment.
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