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For My Mom
A letter to my mom



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Rating of the story An Adult Conversation by oliviastjames

Your narrative and dialog (soliloquy) are excellent but ... I guess this just is not my genre. I felt you were going out of your way to shock and I wasn't shocked, just bored. Thus I must leave it to your other readers to assess the content.


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Rating of the poem When You Are Silent by MissMerri

I read some of the reviews, which some referred to this as free verse. I guess because it doesn't rhyme they think it is. Blank verse and as a sonnet is something I don't think I could do. Superb flow. My favorite line: "while thoughts of you whirl round like autumn winds." Also, the ending is great, in that silence is where peace is found. Wonderfully written. Les



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Rating of the book chapter A Glimmer of Hope by CR Delport
Chapter 30 of the book Keepers of the Blue Planet

This chapter read smoothly, and I spotted no issues. Perhaps, brothers in arms should be hyphenated:
brothers-in-arms
Not sure.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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Rating of the poem Cyberlink by RPFoster

And if the internet should die
I'd come find you, that's no lie

Whoa Robert, this is real friendship, beautiful phrases, outstanding picture, an amazing penned poem from you , young man. Hugs Terry xoxo


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Rating of the poem For My Mom by ExperiencingLiphe

We all do. It's good that you still have your mom. Mine died and up to now, I still can decipher what happened between us. Pride tore us apart.


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