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Gold Of Dawn
A Naani



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Rating of the poem Fanstory by rama devi

I like the assonance in old/globe
good long prose mile imagery
if one rides the - I am not a fan of leaving a line hanging with a word like hang for the sake of adhering to a form rule, like syllable count, or, in this case, the need to adhere to the acrostic spelling
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a good-natured look at our writing community in this acrostic for Fanstory
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Rating of the poem My Strength by rrabinow

Love music with a message! I wish I could hear the melody that goes with these heart-felt lyrics. :)

Problems? Just this: "Your strength is the key
When I have a frown" My brain was just looking for this to be defined a bit more. Strength is the key to a frown? Huh?

Other than that, I like the poem and want a melody! :)


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Rating of the story YOUR TIME IS GONNA COME by Liisa

This is an exquiste story!! Very enjoyable and a very easy read. It got my heart going (along with a few other parts)! Your definately a talented writer!


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Rating of the poem My Strength by rrabinow

You stand behind me You lift me up when I am down Your strength is the key When I have a frown

You know just what to say To bring me cheer Every single day And I have nothing to fear

For you are always behind me And lift me higher Than I ever thought I'd be As you are my fire



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Rating of the poem I Need a New Desk by Warren Rodgers

I really liked your work. The poem flowed well and had a nice rhyme. You made it easy to visualize the desk top. It really could belong to most of us. Thanks for sharing.


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