Challenge Me
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
love this free-flowing mediation on life, love, the universe and everything else. I like the refrain it fits the poem's theme very well and I like the last line most.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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love this free-flowing mediation on life, love, the universe and everything else. I like the refrain it fits the poem's theme very well and I like the last line most.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you jake :-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So sorry I am late with this review. I have now returned home. I have missed my daily reading of your poems. You are extremely talented and deserve to be read immediately.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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So sorry I am late with this review. I have now returned home. I have missed my daily reading of your poems. You are extremely talented and deserve to be read immediately.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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lol thank you barbara :-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Shelley. It was posted waay earlier than when I joined. I never thought you need help. I believe you are expressing your thought and feelings about many things that are important to you, with the first and foremost one being about YOU.
Yes, your writing allows readers to have some insight into the real you.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your poem, Shelley. It was posted waay earlier than when I joined. I never thought you need help. I believe you are expressing your thought and feelings about many things that are important to you, with the first and foremost one being about YOU.
Yes, your writing allows readers to have some insight into the real you.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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thank you jan :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
A dynamic and creative romantic post with great imagery, visuals and presentation.
I liked your artwork, it matches the poem perfectly. Thank you for your author notes.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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A dynamic and creative romantic post with great imagery, visuals and presentation.
I liked your artwork, it matches the poem perfectly. Thank you for your author notes.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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thank you em :-)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Shelley, I enjoyed reading your poem. Good alliteration within, and your message is clear. I wish I had more time to think about the challenge, but I have one--just a phrase. Forgive me, brain is fried. It's almost midnight here.
A fun poem. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer" Smiles.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Hello Shelley, I enjoyed reading your poem. Good alliteration within, and your message is clear. I wish I had more time to think about the challenge, but I have one--just a phrase. Forgive me, brain is fried. It's almost midnight here.
A fun poem. "Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer" Smiles.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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love it! will work on that today and tomorrow! thank you lb :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Challenge me ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to read and review. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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' Challenge me ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to read and review. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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cool! thank you duchess :-)
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You're welcome. Cool just about covers it shelly :)))
Bless you the Duchess
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Challenge Me, is well paced and laced with teasing alliteration and rhyme, as your text skips along to end in a challenge for others to do likewise. Fun.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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This poem, Challenge Me, is well paced and laced with teasing alliteration and rhyme, as your text skips along to end in a challenge for others to do likewise. Fun.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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thank you bill :-)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You do very well with words. You are unique. I enjoy reading your work.
Keep writing. You are great at what you do. I look forward reading your writing. Stay safe. Good luck
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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You do very well with words. You are unique. I enjoy reading your work.
Keep writing. You are great at what you do. I look forward reading your writing. Stay safe. Good luck
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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thank you carolyn :-)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Janetsue
While I have never been a real word nerd, I always find them fascinating when a good write presents something memorable. Your challenge is intriguing and you are very brave for posting it. You have already shown you have a rich imagination...much to readers' delight. (You were the first person I fanned when I rejoined FanStory.) Smiles and hugs!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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While I have never been a real word nerd, I always find them fascinating when a good write presents something memorable. Your challenge is intriguing and you are very brave for posting it. You have already shown you have a rich imagination...much to readers' delight. (You were the first person I fanned when I rejoined FanStory.) Smiles and hugs!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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cool! thank you spangle :)
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Practice make perfect great job make the words better for us to read but overnight all is a good read keep it up stay inspired thank you again my friend for sharing this
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Practice make perfect great job make the words better for us to read but overnight all is a good read keep it up stay inspired thank you again my friend for sharing this
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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thank you gg :)
