Port in the Storm
naani12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Port in the Storm, uses twenty-three syllables in these four lines to create an escape from the stuff out there and imbibe within sanctuary. (Or something else).
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This naani, Port in the Storm, uses twenty-three syllables in these four lines to create an escape from the stuff out there and imbibe within sanctuary. (Or something else).
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
Comment from BeasPeas
I'm struggling to understand the naani, but because I don't that doesn't mean someone else won't. You have used descriptive words and a striking image. Marilyn
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I'm struggling to understand the naani, but because I don't that doesn't mean someone else won't. You have used descriptive words and a striking image. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
Comment from kathleenspalding
Hahaha! I liked this Naani poem even before I noticed the great title, which makes it a superb and clever piece! Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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Hahaha! I liked this Naani poem even before I noticed the great title, which makes it a superb and clever piece! Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
Comment from victor 66
The Naani poem format is new to me but I find it interesting, and I would like to give it a try. I thought your Naani poem was good and hope you don't mind if I use it for an example. Best wishes.
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The Naani poem format is new to me but I find it interesting, and I would like to give it a try. I thought your Naani poem was good and hope you don't mind if I use it for an example. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent naani poem and entry for the contest
with the right number of syllables.
Excellent play on words and fine imagery
with the port wine and the fiery comparison.
Good choice of interesting art work.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
RS
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This is an excellent naani poem and entry for the contest
with the right number of syllables.
Excellent play on words and fine imagery
with the port wine and the fiery comparison.
Good choice of interesting art work.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
RS
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good, as well
as the style of the poem.
-Effective and vivid imagery
throughout the poem.
-This is all because of
"a single glass of wine"
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very good image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good, as well
as the style of the poem.
-Effective and vivid imagery
throughout the poem.
-This is all because of
"a single glass of wine"
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from Pamusart
Being alone by choice is fine and relaxing and tranquil. Being alone all of the time is stressful as is being alone at a critical time. Well put. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
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Being alone by choice is fine and relaxing and tranquil. Being alone all of the time is stressful as is being alone at a critical time. Well put. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from cailinraine8
Seems like a long story told in four lines.... we can imagine a lot behind this.... but we know it is tumultuous.... the colours accent this perfectly... a troubled person sits in front of the fireplace. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win!
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Seems like a long story told in four lines.... we can imagine a lot behind this.... but we know it is tumultuous.... the colours accent this perfectly... a troubled person sits in front of the fireplace. Nicely done. Congratulations on your win!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Naani Poem' writing prompt.
I like the way you refer to the wine as lightening in a bottle.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Naani Poem' writing prompt.
I like the way you refer to the wine as lightening in a bottle.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a great entry for the Naani poetry contest. Your choice of artwork does amplify and grab the reader into your theme. Well done on this and good luck with the contest.
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This is a great entry for the Naani poetry contest. Your choice of artwork does amplify and grab the reader into your theme. Well done on this and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
