Comment from cailinraine8

Excellent

This is beautifully done... both writing and illustration of course. Congratulations on your First Place in the contest. Very deserved. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thank you for your encouraging comments!

Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

You have created a very nice poem for the Nonet Contest. Thanks for the very interesting information about the Monarch Butterfly that adds to your work. Good work. Your poem flows nicely telling a story about these amazing creatures. I wish you well in this competition.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Appreciate very much your insightful comments.

Comment from samantha0930

Excellent

I like your poem; it's a nice observation of the Monarch butterflies, and I think the picture goes very well with your poem.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poem contest.
Well said and a clear story within the format.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the imagery, it is so compelling and very well written with elegance and finesse!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a hearty hug!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciate your insights.