Robert's Special Day
First in the Robert's Advenures Series.13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem for children. The most important event for children is their birthday each year. The cake and presents are the other important things of their birthday that must be perfect.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem for children. The most important event for children is their birthday each year. The cake and presents are the other important things of their birthday that must be perfect.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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You are right of course! It would be great to go back in time to have just one more of these birthdays. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Ricky1024
Boogienights was well written with great theme and imagery.
This was also rich in Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Boogienights was well written with great theme and imagery.
This was also rich in Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Wow, thanks so much. I love writing about Robert, it's a lot of fun.
Comment from Sherman541
I love this poem and kids will too. I do not have six stars left, many good poems recently. I know this reminded very much of "Poor Old Jonathan Bing", one of my favorites! Maybe I saw, more well known poems incorporated, but I loved this story. Very fun and wonderfully written. Sherman541
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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I love this poem and kids will too. I do not have six stars left, many good poems recently. I know this reminded very much of "Poor Old Jonathan Bing", one of my favorites! Maybe I saw, more well known poems incorporated, but I loved this story. Very fun and wonderfully written. Sherman541
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, it means a lot to hear from fellow writers.
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you are most welcome :) I thought it was great!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a delightful tale about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune and his birthday celebration, I absolutely loved the rhymes and flow, such a cheery and warm poem and children would love this story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This is such a delightful tale about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune and his birthday celebration, I absolutely loved the rhymes and flow, such a cheery and warm poem and children would love this story, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you, I think you are a very talented poet and your opinion means a lot.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a delightful children's poem that I enjoyed reading. I like the format you've chosen to write it. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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This is a delightful children's poem that I enjoyed reading. I like the format you've chosen to write it. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Excellent job for the children's poem entry. You have my vote. I love the child's name and the notion of him floating away in a hot air balloon. Those are great ideas for children's books. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Excellent job for the children's poem entry. You have my vote. I love the child's name and the notion of him floating away in a hot air balloon. Those are great ideas for children's books. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your vote. It's my first attempt at children's poetry. I'm glad that you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This was so sweet and so cute! I found myself while reading your work enjoying Robert's special day with him. I like the cute artwork, rhyming aspect, and flow. This is a winner. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This was so sweet and so cute! I found myself while reading your work enjoying Robert's special day with him. I like the cute artwork, rhyming aspect, and flow. This is a winner. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a kind review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Delightful and so charming. I enjoyed reading your poem story. It is so amusing and interesting. I love your repeated lines adding emphasis to your poem story. Children would love it too. Good luck! liberty justice
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Delightful and so charming. I enjoyed reading your poem story. It is so amusing and interesting. I love your repeated lines adding emphasis to your poem story. Children would love it too. Good luck! liberty justice
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for such a great review, I really appreciate it.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks fun and fantasy on Robert's adventure flying on a special birthday balloon; he got a gift of horn to play and wished to be a leader of a marching band, now sleeps; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This speaks fun and fantasy on Robert's adventure flying on a special birthday balloon; he got a gift of horn to play and wished to be a leader of a marching band, now sleeps; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reviewing my work, I appreciate it so much.
Comment from Violet WolfChild
This is adorable. I could feel the warmth and happiness that comes with a child's joy. Beautifully written. Everything flows together nicely and story is captivating.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is adorable. I could feel the warmth and happiness that comes with a child's joy. Beautifully written. Everything flows together nicely and story is captivating.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you, I appreciate it so much. It made my day!
