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Blind Rufus

A blind cat meets new friends

6 total reviews 
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Oh, good. You're writing more cat stories. I have been away for a while so I'm miles behind in my reviewing. Severe back problems have been keeping me down and sitting too long is hard. Hope to conquer it soon. Nice story.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    I wondered where you had gotten to. Glad you enjoyed this. Sincerely Anne
Comment from nassus1957
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Wow, I guess animals also communicate and are worried too with daily human and cat-actions. Little children will surely love this story and they will read it with much delight. Teachers can use when introducing the values of helping the needy, social interaction and friendship. Thanks for an awesome write.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    And I thank you for the lovely review. It makes us try harder when people explain what a story does for them. Thank U. Anne.
Comment from jlsavell
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dear sweet Anne,

I am back for just a little while. I wrote you a long review in my pms. I love this work. You are such a talented writer.

I wrote it because there were some grammar and punctuation mistakes I wanted to help you with. However, such mistakes should not take away for a great great story.
I would love for you to find a publisher and an editor.. you would take off!!!!!!!

adore you.. sending you a pm...

jimi

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Hi Jimi My dear sweet friend. Thank you so much for reading my contributions, they keep me sane. I go for surgery on 27th Feb. and hopefully the pain that has plagued me for four years will stop. I had a huge crash (computer type) and I lost so much and it has taken me ages to get back some of my programs. Again thank you for reading. Love Anne
reply by jlsavell on 09-Feb-2018
    do you need help..
    what kind of surgery..
    i am back for a while
    I try not to stay on here for months at a time,, it takes away from too many good things in your life of true reality..

    let me know..
    your friend, always..

    jimi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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A good story to teach children the value of good deeds and helping one another out.
It teaches them about the value of life and of working together to reach a goal.
Ultimately, it also allows them to see animals in a kinder light.

Thanks for the share,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Hi Rhonda, thank you for reading, warts and all. Blessings to you, Anne
Comment from aryr
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Oh, Anne, it is so good to have Bugsy back and once again in charge. He is just that sort of cat. It was rather wise of Bugsy to think of befriending Rufus; an act of kindness for cats and people. Poor Mikey was indeed a brave one to volunteer and thanks to Bugsy's quick thinking about the feather it proved to be a great idea. Very well done, and very much appreciate, thanks.
There is only one change I would suggest. In the sentence that starts-"Yes. However I know nothing of seeing, - Drop the Yes and however. By having the yes and however it implies that Rufus has seen and he hasn't, since he was blind from birth. Only a suggestion my friend, take care, Love U Alie.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Thank you dear heart. I'll go straight in and fix that. I had Jimi Savell review as well. Love to U Anne.
reply by aryr on 09-Feb-2018
    You are so welcome Anne, Jimi Savell is a good reviewer. Do take care Luv Alie.
Comment from royowen
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What a very thoughtful cat Bugsy Malone is. You'd think being top cat in the street would be easy, but Bugsy takes his position seriously, and being a thoughtful watch cat seriously, arranges for Mickey to look after the blind cat. Well done Anne, good scribing, blessings, Roy
Typo : Rufus(,) were you like this as a little cat...

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Hi Roy, I can always get favourable reviews when I write 'cat stories.' There are so many cat lovers it cheers me no end. Thank you so much. Sincerely Anne.
reply by royowen on 09-Feb-2018
    Well done Anne