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Recci And Lola Go Shopping

Animal Cracker - Two pets go shopping

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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A big smiles Sandra du Plessis
Your make believe shopping day with Recci and Lola was so much fun to read especially this part
Oh, Recci, look at these cute pajamas, it has little puppies printed on it, looking like our own (puppies) Gert

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Hi Gert,

    Thank you very much for your kind comments and feedback, I always appreciate your time to read and review my work and also your continuous support.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
reply by Gert sherwood on 13-Feb-2018
    You are welcome Sandra
    Gert
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A lovely little shopping tale from mum and dad doggies POV. Good on Lola, such a great bargain buyer she still had money left for the bones. Cute story for the animal crackers club.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much for your kind comments and feedback, I always appreciate your time to read and review my work and also your continuous support.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from Bichon
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A nice story Sandra. I'd watch your long sentences though, for example;
"Thank you, my dear Lola" you could've started a new sentence here, and gone on to say "I am so pleased you know how to manage our money,"

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Sandra, the puppies are so adorable! I like the names. I enjoyed reading the story from the dog's perspective and it is a good prompt for the writing challenge.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your speaking from the dogs' perspective and the clever, descriptive names of the puppies, along with the cute, matching picture. Big smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from CD Richards
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I'm glad you told us the shopping trip is fictional, Sandra - otherwise I'd be starting to worry!

This is a fun story, and well written. I bet they'd look extra cute in their new PJs.

Well done,
Craig

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from lyenochka
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Fun imagination. I wonder if they really have stores where dogs can shop now. They do shop with their owners in our stores because they considered "comfort" animals for those with PTSD. Yes, moms of all species know how to care for their families!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Sandra. This is so cute. Love the photo of the puppies and sorry you couldn't find the one you had to use with the story. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute entry for the Animal Crackers club about the little animals going shopping. You used very cute and sweet words with adorable imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hi, Sandra;
Thank you for sharing this little tale about a mama and papa dog on a shopping trip for the litter of babes. Your wording was cute and I could imagine the pair juggling their purchases,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.