Winter Has Passed
A Tri-Fall Poem for Potlatch31 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Yvonne, I have never heard of this form...but I like it...this was a cold wet winter...and I know so many are looking forward to spring...sounds good to me...I love your poem sweet girl...and love the picture...Yes!!!...spring again...LOL...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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HI Yvonne, I have never heard of this form...but I like it...this was a cold wet winter...and I know so many are looking forward to spring...sounds good to me...I love your poem sweet girl...and love the picture...Yes!!!...spring again...LOL...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate this great review. I'm still enjoying winter.
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sure...and I'm stuck in Florida...80 today...LOL...your so welcome Yvonne...love xxoo
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Winter has passed and spring is starting to blossom and it's well described in your Tri-Fall poem. I love the sound of the squirrels cavorting and the hummingbirds hovering, with scattered alliteration through your verses, always adds to the read.
cheers.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Winter has passed and spring is starting to blossom and it's well described in your Tri-Fall poem. I love the sound of the squirrels cavorting and the hummingbirds hovering, with scattered alliteration through your verses, always adds to the read.
cheers.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Pearl. That means a lot.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You paint a fun and lively scene here in your poem which is full of nature and alive with life, I love seeing plants and bud poke through against all odds, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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You paint a fun and lively scene here in your poem which is full of nature and alive with life, I love seeing plants and bud poke through against all odds, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I must admit, I have never seen nor heard of a Tri-fall poem before now, Yvonne.
But I DO know what I like, and I very much enjoyed reading your rendition.
Very nice...
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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I must admit, I have never seen nor heard of a Tri-fall poem before now, Yvonne.
But I DO know what I like, and I very much enjoyed reading your rendition.
Very nice...
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Dean. I'm so glad.
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a really well-written poem about when the dawn of spring arrives! It's so beautiful when we get to finally see many plants and animals escaping their winter hibernation; the world restores in its natural beauty again. Your poem really expresses that moment :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This is a really well-written poem about when the dawn of spring arrives! It's so beautiful when we get to finally see many plants and animals escaping their winter hibernation; the world restores in its natural beauty again. Your poem really expresses that moment :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you for saying so. What a wonderful compliment.
Comment from JennaG
This is such a pretty poem! Great use of alliteration throughout. I especially like "cursing cats". I can almost hear that little chattering sound the squirrels make. You've created wonderful imagery with your skillful wording and this piece has made me even more ready for spring, especially since we're about to get dumped on with more snow. Lol :) Excellent work! :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is such a pretty poem! Great use of alliteration throughout. I especially like "cursing cats". I can almost hear that little chattering sound the squirrels make. You've created wonderful imagery with your skillful wording and this piece has made me even more ready for spring, especially since we're about to get dumped on with more snow. Lol :) Excellent work! :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I envy you the snow. We've only had a smattering for one day.
Thank you for such a wonderful review. I still like winter best. 8-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This tri-fall poem, Winter Has Passed, is nicely formed and creates the anticipation for spring. Not to be that guy, but do 'trees' and 'hovering' rhyme? Happy day.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This tri-fall poem, Winter Has Passed, is nicely formed and creates the anticipation for spring. Not to be that guy, but do 'trees' and 'hovering' rhyme? Happy day.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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You're absolutely right. Since I'm not going to publish it anywhere else, I'll let it go. Thanks for catching it. Thanks for watching out for me.
Comment from smileycloud
"Tri-fall"
what a pretty intricate style of poetry
and I must say; you have "nailed it"
with beauty of speech and graceful lines telling an excellent story of the seasons' change
I absolutely love your closing line
and the form you have it perfect as well as the word imagery is vivid and strong
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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"Tri-fall"
what a pretty intricate style of poetry
and I must say; you have "nailed it"
with beauty of speech and graceful lines telling an excellent story of the seasons' change
I absolutely love your closing line
and the form you have it perfect as well as the word imagery is vivid and strong
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for a such a wonderful review. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from doggymad
Nice bright work praising all the wondrous things nature has in store for us in Spring.
It is all the more intriguing and full of hope as we still have snow on the ground here
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Nice bright work praising all the wondrous things nature has in store for us in Spring.
It is all the more intriguing and full of hope as we still have snow on the ground here
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I wish we had snow here. Hopefully, we'll get some before February is over. The year I bought this house, everything was covered in ice on April 1. That's too late. I want it now. lol
Thank you for your review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
The best-liked time of year
by many
because all life begins anew.
Birdsongs bring lilting cheer,
not any
blemishes on horizons blue.' Beautiful your rhyme scheme is also perfect. Well done spring is also my favorite time of year. Love and kindest regards love Meia x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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The best-liked time of year
by many
because all life begins anew.
Birdsongs bring lilting cheer,
not any
blemishes on horizons blue.' Beautiful your rhyme scheme is also perfect. Well done spring is also my favorite time of year. Love and kindest regards love Meia x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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It seems to almost everyone's favorite. I still like winter best. Thanks for reviewing.
