Random Belief
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever acrostic and this is one was of looking as belief, but you could believe in yourself or Santa Claus! Your poem is witty and rhymes too, I liked it, good luck with it Tom, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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A clever acrostic and this is one was of looking as belief, but you could believe in yourself or Santa Claus! Your poem is witty and rhymes too, I liked it, good luck with it Tom, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Dolly. I have added another stanza so the poem is now entitled 'Random Belief'. Take care my friend. tom
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very neat sestet in alternate rhyme, with triple rhyme on the even numbered lines. Many will write at greater length but few will make them rhyme at all, or have other poetic worth apart from their acrosticity. Is that a word? It is now.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is a very neat sestet in alternate rhyme, with triple rhyme on the even numbered lines. Many will write at greater length but few will make them rhyme at all, or have other poetic worth apart from their acrosticity. Is that a word? It is now.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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And I will borrow your word and if anyone asked me if it is legit I will say 'Well it has to be because Pantygynt created it and said it is now a word'. lol Thanks a million my friend. I added another stanza so it is now entitled 'Random Belief'. Take care my friend. tom
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very good use of the style (I never could get the hang of acrostics, myself).
A genuinely strong, and very well worded, poem, all the more so in light of the form's restrictions.
Great job. I liked this a lot.
Take care.
-James
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Very good use of the style (I never could get the hang of acrostics, myself).
A genuinely strong, and very well worded, poem, all the more so in light of the form's restrictions.
Great job. I liked this a lot.
Take care.
-James
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hey James. I have added another stanza to this poem and now it is entitled 'Random Belief'. I thank you good friend for a great review. tom
