Random Belief
Discussing belief63 total reviews
Comment from MsPetra
You have done a fantastic job with this. A lot of people write these types of poems and they write the lines starting with the correct letter, but then they can't get a proper rhyming pattern. You, on the other hand, nailed it. Kudos.
I didn't see anything that needed changing.
I am looking forward to your next offering.
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You have done a fantastic job with this. A lot of people write these types of poems and they write the lines starting with the correct letter, but then they can't get a proper rhyming pattern. You, on the other hand, nailed it. Kudos.
I didn't see anything that needed changing.
I am looking forward to your next offering.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Really enjoyed this open minded take on belief, a refreshing and respectful Acrostic poem that is challenging to both mind and soul.
Good luck in the contest
Mitchell
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Really enjoyed this open minded take on belief, a refreshing and respectful Acrostic poem that is challenging to both mind and soul.
Good luck in the contest
Mitchell
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Everett, RANDOM BELIEF is an excellent acrostic promoting the concept of religious/philosophical tolerance (imagine that!). It is well organized and well written. Seen any rocks flying in your direction yet? :) Nancy
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Everett, RANDOM BELIEF is an excellent acrostic promoting the concept of religious/philosophical tolerance (imagine that!). It is well organized and well written. Seen any rocks flying in your direction yet? :) Nancy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Ben Colder
I suppose many have various opinions toward belief, religious or otherwise. You bring this out in your wording. I find nothing wrong and wish you success in the contest.
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I suppose many have various opinions toward belief, religious or otherwise. You bring this out in your wording. I find nothing wrong and wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt.
A nice Acrostic verse spelling out the message of the poem, nicely rhymed.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt.
A nice Acrostic verse spelling out the message of the poem, nicely rhymed.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, RANDOM BELIEF, follows the vertical theme and puts a tether on blind faith when it challenges reason and facts. Faith is believing in what can't be seen or proved.
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This acrostic poem, RANDOM BELIEF, follows the vertical theme and puts a tether on blind faith when it challenges reason and facts. Faith is believing in what can't be seen or proved.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Bichon
Great job with this one. It made for an enjoyable read, as did the unique form you have used. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry!
Chloe
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Great job with this one. It made for an enjoyable read, as did the unique form you have used. Best of luck in the contest with this great entry!
Chloe
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from charlene7190
Profound statement and words that lead us to a truth that we must honor. "Defend all truth when reason cheers". Defending truth is what drives people but each of us has our own truth. Thank you for your words of wisdom. You are a wordsmith and wish you well in the contest.
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Profound statement and words that lead us to a truth that we must honor. "Defend all truth when reason cheers". Defending truth is what drives people but each of us has our own truth. Thank you for your words of wisdom. You are a wordsmith and wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from catch22
Hi Tom, what a wise and balanced message of moderation for all! I agree wholeheartedly and you've done a fantastic job with the acrostic and use of mono-rhyming in your poem. I liked the chosen words your poem expands upon. It is a well thought concept and execution.
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Hi Tom, what a wise and balanced message of moderation for all! I agree wholeheartedly and you've done a fantastic job with the acrostic and use of mono-rhyming in your poem. I liked the chosen words your poem expands upon. It is a well thought concept and execution.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from MSJVClarke
This is a very interesting and well-written acrostic. I liked that you used the random belief as your topic and found so many true points to make with the letters. It is certainly true to point. Well done!
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This is a very interesting and well-written acrostic. I liked that you used the random belief as your topic and found so many true points to make with the letters. It is certainly true to point. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
