Stay With Me
double 5-7-566 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
Lovely thoughts expressed in this little poem. I would not change a thing. I definitely think that a woman's embrace is more heartfelt. Good job all around.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Lovely thoughts expressed in this little poem. I would not change a thing. I definitely think that a woman's embrace is more heartfelt. Good job all around.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hi Debbie, yes they are...we may not be good for chopping wood...even though so are...LOL...but we are loving...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from mrsmajor
Two poems using the 5-7-5 form, very well...I think the very idea of a woman holding a man, may not be what we're used too, its something I personally loved doing when my Richard was with me...Love is shown by both man and woman, and both can be quite meaningful...thanks for sharing this with us, it was a pleasant read...I loved the picture...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Two poems using the 5-7-5 form, very well...I think the very idea of a woman holding a man, may not be what we're used too, its something I personally loved doing when my Richard was with me...Love is shown by both man and woman, and both can be quite meaningful...thanks for sharing this with us, it was a pleasant read...I loved the picture...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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HI Victoria, I love the picture as well sweet girl...and you are so right...love is shown by both...and a nice cozy hug says a lot...thank you for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
You're quite welcome, my friend, the picture brought back memories to me...I just loved hugging my Richard, he was 6 foot tall and I'm just 5 foot, He'd always laugh...though I was funny...thanks also for the stars...
Love ya back...xxoo...
Warmly,
Victotia
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Hi sweet girl, that is funny...I use to love hugging with my husband...sigh...that is a big size difference...LOL...you are always so welcome. my sweet friend...lve xxoo
Comment from misscookie
All I can say right now about your poem Amen!
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
They are a perfect match
Your words said it all
l Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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All I can say right now about your poem Amen!
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
They are a perfect match
Your words said it all
l Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hi Misscookie, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the artwork as well...you are so very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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You welcome my friend
Cookie
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Linda this is a lovely double 5/7/5, written true to form in both. Your words are lovely - a true love message. Well display with a gorgeous picture. Well done and warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Linda this is a lovely double 5/7/5, written true to form in both. Your words are lovely - a true love message. Well display with a gorgeous picture. Well done and warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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HI Dorothy, how are you sweet girl???...thank you so very much for a wonderful review my sweet friend...I am so glad you like it...and I love the picture as well...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I do believe for the most part that women's feelings are much stronger. This is a delightful double 5-7-5, well expressed and proper syllable count. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I do believe for the most part that women's feelings are much stronger. This is a delightful double 5-7-5, well expressed and proper syllable count. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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HI Debbie, I agree with you...I think God made us that way...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it my sweet friend...you take care as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from MissMerri
Linda, I've read this several times, and think the premise is wonderful and the words you chose are very evocative. It is nice to think of a woman embracing a man and in the process, making herself feel so secure. I've never seen a 5-7-5 as a double layer, but it certainly works here. Thank you for sharing with us a bit of your heart. MM
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Linda, I've read this several times, and think the premise is wonderful and the words you chose are very evocative. It is nice to think of a woman embracing a man and in the process, making herself feel so secure. I've never seen a 5-7-5 as a double layer, but it certainly works here. Thank you for sharing with us a bit of your heart. MM
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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HI Adonna, you always see the man holding the woman he loves tight in his arms...the woman may not have the same strength as the man...but her heart is still equal in love...it's not in the strength of his arms....it's in the true love in his heart....thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
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Adonna, I was reading back on my reviews...you wrote...making herself feel so secure...not what it says....you make me feel so secure...wrapped within my arms...
meaning....he makes her feel secure...as she holds him in her arms....not that she's making herself feel secure....he makes her feel safe...as she holds him...the way you have it...it makes it sound like he had nothing to do with it...that would be wrong...in the line...you make me feel so secure...the you...is him...love xxoo
Comment from writerjen
Nicely written double 5-7-5 haiku poem. Descriptive, good imagery. You followed the syllable count well. It must be hard to write a double haiku, i've never tried it. Nie picture to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Nicely written double 5-7-5 haiku poem. Descriptive, good imagery. You followed the syllable count well. It must be hard to write a double haiku, i've never tried it. Nie picture to accompany your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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HI Jen, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love ya...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is beautiful my friend there is nothing like feeling secure in the arms of the one you love I enjoyed this beautiful presentation ... Jill
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This is beautiful my friend there is nothing like feeling secure in the arms of the one you love I enjoyed this beautiful presentation ... Jill
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Hi Jill, thank you so very much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and you are so very right...there is nothing like feeling secure in the arms of the one you love...sigh...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
a woman's embrace
may not be strong as a man's
but just as heartfelt' This is a CLASSIC motto...It should be remembered by everyone- it's fantastic. What a poem I only WISH I had a six left for your amazing work love and hugs Meia x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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a woman's embrace
may not be strong as a man's
but just as heartfelt' This is a CLASSIC motto...It should be remembered by everyone- it's fantastic. What a poem I only WISH I had a six left for your amazing work love and hugs Meia x
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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HI Meia, my wonderful, talented, sweet friend...LOL...just you being here is so much better than a six...thank you so very much for a wonderful review...your awesome...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment from Dutchie
Very wonderful Linda, this double 5-7-5 poem. The picture is really beautiful
This poem is very romantic. A woman's embrace is maybe not very strong, but full of passion... Well done. Fia
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Very wonderful Linda, this double 5-7-5 poem. The picture is really beautiful
This poem is very romantic. A woman's embrace is maybe not very strong, but full of passion... Well done. Fia
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Hi Fia, you are so very right my sweet friend...doesn't matter who has the strong hug...when the love is there...so good to see you...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...love you....Linda xxoo
