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Power of the Flower: Flower Power

Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Bullying be gone Part IV"
Because of a screw up, a new section for Flower.

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Comment from Sugarray77
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The theme of your story is very good and you know how to handle it well. I did have a problem with bouncing from one flower to another. I got confused. Regards.

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    TY, Sugarray77
Comment from mvbrooks
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I've been told that the portion of our adult population with the highest self-esteem are found among the populations in our prisons. If self-esteem is measured by a person's own placing of value on his/her self-worth, perhaps that's true.

It reminds me that psychology is often the opposite of what we first expect. For example, we're told not to be selfish. But, we must be selfish to look out for ourselves. Instead, we should be taught not to be very-selfish.

So bullies may feel good about getting want they want--but instead of measuring their self-esteem (their own insight), there should be a societal word for measuring the value of one's contributions to others.


just a thought.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    TY!! :) This is true, thank you.
Comment from MsPetra
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I gave you five stars because I think it is very well written. I have no suggestions for improvement. You've don a great job here.
I do think it's a little complex for children's literature.
Please keep writing. I am looking forward to your next offering.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    TY! I just saw your name is near to Mrs. Petals :D
reply by MsPetra on 11-Feb-2018
    Oh that's funny. You should see what's right next to my book "Black Fire" on The Smashwords website. The other book has the same name too. It's hilarious. I have to give people the info that will take them directly to the books page.
    I hope Ms Petals is a good author. Lol
    Peace and blessings.
    Ms Petra
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Bullies are all about "me". That is what they are concerned with. The best way to rid a bully is stand up to them. Once you do that they stop bullying. Well written story.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    TY!
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hi, Nome;
Thank you for sharing another chapter about bullying. I think there can't be enough information on the subject. Our children need to learn about it, be prepared for it, and hopefully, find a way to put an end to it,

~patty~

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Yeah. I wish that I could do that with this book -- very wishful thinking, though. TY!!
Comment from mbroyles2
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This is a fantastic children's story and deals with a sensitive and important subject in today's world.
You deliver it so well and the young minds can connect easily.
I think you have a winner here with Flower Power and friends.
Great job!
Michael

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    TY, Michael!
Comment from charlene7190
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I love the concept of "Flower Power" and need to read the whole story. I got a little lost because I came in late. I will definitely read more. This is such an important subject and I'm glad you are addressing it.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you!! :)
Comment from mmonaghan777
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This is important to be shared with everyone. It is a subject that is hard to understand from both sides. The child who was raised by insecurity and the child who was loved. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    TY!!
Comment from sandramitchell
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If this book isn't taken up by the education department, I will be very surprised. This is a must have book for children and parents. Parents need to find out why their child has the need to bully, and children need to understand that they can be more powerful by being a kind friend to others. Well done, Rasmine, another excellent story. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    TY!!!
Comment from c_lucas
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Bullies are not intelligent enough to know anything but a desire to build themselves up by putting lesser ones down.
Error
He walked up to the podium and tapped it to see if it was on. (You are talking about the microphone and not toe Podium.)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    TY!!! I made that correction. :D
reply by c_lucas on 10-Feb-2018
    You're welcome.