~ Gone But Never Forgotten ~
5 Line Poem: 2-2-5-7-5 (HM)13 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
As usual, I am lagging far behind in everything - my apologies for being so late to review that a deserved six would do nothing to promote this wonderful poem. Talk about tugging on heartstrings!!! This resonates too deeply for me, yet at the same time, that last line brings comfort...
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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As usual, I am lagging far behind in everything - my apologies for being so late to review that a deserved six would do nothing to promote this wonderful poem. Talk about tugging on heartstrings!!! This resonates too deeply for me, yet at the same time, that last line brings comfort...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Dawn, Thank you, again. I appreciate your review. ~DD
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Very much my pleasure.!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely written poem. It's emotional, nostalgic and sensitive. The image reflects the tenderness of the composition. I think everyone can identify with your words. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is a very nicely written poem. It's emotional, nostalgic and sensitive. The image reflects the tenderness of the composition. I think everyone can identify with your words. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Marilyn. I appreciate you taking the time to pop in an review. Warm blessings to you. ~DD
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
I so love and appreciate the sentiments expressed in your 5 line poem. How I wish my father was still alive to walk with me and talk with me about everything and nothing. A well-crafted offering that resonates visually and emotionally with me.
diane
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hello!
I so love and appreciate the sentiments expressed in your 5 line poem. How I wish my father was still alive to walk with me and talk with me about everything and nothing. A well-crafted offering that resonates visually and emotionally with me.
diane
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Diane for your wonderful review and shiny six stars. Reading your comments warmed my heart as you were able to read behind the scene of the words. I wrote this for my father who passed away on 26 December just gone. He loved to walk and I have spent many times with him over the course of my life being with him somewhere on foot. He was such a wonderful man and I miss him and wish him still alive too. Thank you for understanding. ~DDx
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I have written a number of tributes to my own father. If you get a moment, "Better Than Any Train Ride," found in my portfolio is my favorite. I read it often...just because...
Take Care,
diane
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Diane, I look forward to stepping in to have a read of ?Better Than Any Train Ride?. Thank you for that. ~DDoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five line poem. We never forget the ones who once was part of our lives. We will always keep their memory in our hearts and on our minds long after they are gone.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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A very well-written five line poem. We never forget the ones who once was part of our lives. We will always keep their memory in our hearts and on our minds long after they are gone.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate the kind review. Have a good weekend. ~DD
Comment from Joy Graham
This poem and message take me back many years when I'd go for walks with my dad. He's been gone four years and I remember the good times. It took this long to be able to enjoy the good memories of him.
Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This poem and message take me back many years when I'd go for walks with my dad. He's been gone four years and I remember the good times. It took this long to be able to enjoy the good memories of him.
Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Joy for taking the time to review my short poem...and for sharing your thoughts which are very much appreciated. I have many loving memories of my dad and know I am blessed for having him as my father. Have a lovely weekend. ~DD
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice image and poem, DD.
-You have effectively shared special
times in your life in these few lines.
-The last line is very effective and
acts as the satori.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Take care, as well.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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-A very nice image and poem, DD.
-You have effectively shared special
times in your life in these few lines.
-The last line is very effective and
acts as the satori.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Take care, as well.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Pam for the thoughtful review. I?m very grateful, as always. Have a good weekend. Blessings ~DDoxo
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You are very welcome and deserving, DD. You have a good weekend, as well.
Comment from Pantygynt
Youth and age walk together in the poet's memory. A situation well described within the succinct rulles of this form. This one as haiku like overtones with a final line working in the same way as a satori.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Youth and age walk together in the poet's memory. A situation well described within the succinct rulles of this form. This one as haiku like overtones with a final line working in the same way as a satori.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Pantygynt. As always, I appreciate your thoughtful review. Kind regards ~DD
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Reminds me of the many time I did and still do the exact same thing.
Very nicely done for the contest and a joy to read, smooth and real
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Reminds me of the many time I did and still do the exact same thing.
Very nicely done for the contest and a joy to read, smooth and real
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you Barb. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Have a great weekend. ~DD
Comment from red6560
It is difficult to remember a past relationship . Especially when we miss a loved one, "treasured memories" . Its tough to write a five line poem. But you pulled it off. Wishing you the best in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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It is difficult to remember a past relationship . Especially when we miss a loved one, "treasured memories" . Its tough to write a five line poem. But you pulled it off. Wishing you the best in your contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you red. I appreciate your review on my 5 line poem. In this case it was not hard at all to write about a past relationship. This poem is written about my father who passed away in December. I miss him very much. ~DD
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks treasured memories, poet sits and thinks of the moments when they would take walks together again though gone she is never forgotten; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This speaks treasured memories, poet sits and thinks of the moments when they would take walks together again though gone she is never forgotten; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you Alcreator LD. I appreciate the time taken to review my 5 line poem. It is dedicated to my father who passed away in December. I miss him very much. Blessings to you. ~DD
