To Embrace a Breeze
Tetracys9 total reviews
Comment from GLOBALEYES
The photo gives chase to the words which seem to elicit the call of destiny. Nicely done, good picture choice. So many hidden messages can be read. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
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The photo gives chase to the words which seem to elicit the call of destiny. Nicely done, good picture choice. So many hidden messages can be read. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Author what a fantastic image your poem creates. I must admit to being totally daft about the form, but by the count of it, you've written it perfectly. :))
Best luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Author what a fantastic image your poem creates. I must admit to being totally daft about the form, but by the count of it, you've written it perfectly. :))
Best luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from rodea
That is one magical poem. It is beautiful and I believe it follows the rhythm and structure of the Tetractys poetry. The photo really captures the words of the poem. Very enjoyable.
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That is one magical poem. It is beautiful and I believe it follows the rhythm and structure of the Tetractys poetry. The photo really captures the words of the poem. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from royowen
What a nice tetractys entry in this contest. The slightly eerie placing of the voice floating on the wind gives this a great feel to it, mysterious, exciting narrative, well done, blessings, Roy
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What a nice tetractys entry in this contest. The slightly eerie placing of the voice floating on the wind gives this a great feel to it, mysterious, exciting narrative, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from Ella Gott
This is the best! Fan Story has awesome prompts, thanks to people like you! I will definitely use this technique. I have never tried it before so this will be fun!
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This is the best! Fan Story has awesome prompts, thanks to people like you! I will definitely use this technique. I have never tried it before so this will be fun!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from Zue65
The message of love is clear in those lines, I just don't understand why you need a picture of a horse to describe the emotions of love. But whatever is the rationale , I still enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
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The message of love is clear in those lines, I just don't understand why you need a picture of a horse to describe the emotions of love. But whatever is the rationale , I still enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing an excellent write.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from Debbie Pope
Good example of a tetractys. The photo adds so much. I have decided that the poem is about a horse following his nose, chasing the wind. Of course, I know that there are extended meanings here, but I prefer to think of the horse. A free horse. That is an awesome image for me.
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Good example of a tetractys. The photo adds so much. I have decided that the poem is about a horse following his nose, chasing the wind. Of course, I know that there are extended meanings here, but I prefer to think of the horse. A free horse. That is an awesome image for me.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These writes are clever and unique and yours is precious and we all chase love and that wonderful feeling it gives us, warm and romantic words here, love, Dolly x
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These writes are clever and unique and yours is precious and we all chase love and that wonderful feeling it gives us, warm and romantic words here, love, Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from dmt1967
The picture of the horse and the way the words are portrayed is a nice touch. I liked the white mist affect and the way the words and picture blended into one another. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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The picture of the horse and the way the words are portrayed is a nice touch. I liked the white mist affect and the way the words and picture blended into one another. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
