Bake Till Crawfish Red
mixed blessing of beach breeze7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Bake Till Crawfish Red, uses those eleven syllables to suggest that the pleasant conditions on the beaches will lead to extended time under the burning rays of the sun. Red is the new skin cancer.
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This 3-5-3, Bake Till Crawfish Red, uses those eleven syllables to suggest that the pleasant conditions on the beaches will lead to extended time under the burning rays of the sun. Red is the new skin cancer.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
I like the graphics and your words. However,, you only barely mention the air, and that is only a bit of breeze. Would have liked to see more! Good luck in the contest!
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I like the graphics and your words. However,, you only barely mention the air, and that is only a bit of breeze. Would have liked to see more! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am loving these three-line poems. The entries have been so creative. Yours is no exception. The air is definitely different at the beach. I can see why this idea came to mind. Good job.
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I am loving these three-line poems. The entries have been so creative. Yours is no exception. The air is definitely different at the beach. I can see why this idea came to mind. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It's well-written and it flows with humor. I also like your use of your alliteration of b, letters, and sounds. I also like your artwork choice.
Angel123
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It's well-written and it flows with humor. I also like your use of your alliteration of b, letters, and sounds. I also like your artwork choice.
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
Comment from mkflood
Being I'm half Cajun I perk up when I hear crawfish..lol. thanks for selecting my work. It does work well together. Great job and thanks again... MKFlood
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Being I'm half Cajun I perk up when I hear crawfish..lol. thanks for selecting my work. It does work well together. Great job and thanks again... MKFlood
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and I see these people on the beach everyday getting redder and scorching in the hot sun until some are red raw! They are always baking, I wish you luck with the contest, I felt those words like the hot sun on my back, love Dolly x
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A poignant write and I see these people on the beach everyday getting redder and scorching in the hot sun until some are red raw! They are always baking, I wish you luck with the contest, I felt those words like the hot sun on my back, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
Comment from Sherman541
Baking in the sun has always been a relaxing enjoyment for most. However, over baked and turning red, not so much enjoyment. We are at 1 degree right now and that is far better than the -12 it was last night, but that beach sure looks inviting. The mild breeze, with the hot heat pounding down on your blanket while you lie there basking or baking in the sun. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
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Baking in the sun has always been a relaxing enjoyment for most. However, over baked and turning red, not so much enjoyment. We are at 1 degree right now and that is far better than the -12 it was last night, but that beach sure looks inviting. The mild breeze, with the hot heat pounding down on your blanket while you lie there basking or baking in the sun. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
