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haiku (ducks line up)

sunset haiku

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Ducks Line Up, with its fifteen syllables, takes in all the sublime elements of the picture and connects them the frivolity of a fun day at the midway. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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Comment from fayesh
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Your extended metaphor of a carnival image representing a sunset is unique - ducks line up, cotton candy skies. You followed the criteria for this contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a natural environment; the frogs had a musical performance of Nature's lullaby to express love for the skies, after the sunset; well said, well done; Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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    Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Sunset Haiku writing prompt.
You have a good message in your few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thank you!