Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Skyline at Sunset, with its seventeen syllables, pieces the reflections of the days last, colorful hues together to form a majestic ending. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Great review zanya

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Beautiful poem with shades red orange makes for loveky sunset. Photo matches richness theme of mystical delightful sunset. well done. Liberty justice

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for encouraging review zanya

Comment from fayesh

Excellent

Nicely done. You followed the 17 syllable format 5-7-5, which is a plus, and the mosaic metaphor with color flows well. Your haiku showcased the artwork very well.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Sunset haiku.
You have a good message in your few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a nice visual portrayal of the sunset sky in blend of colours appear Nature is bound mosaic; well said and well done; good luck to you with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018