Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu about yourself, Good Grief!, uses seventeen syllables to verify that your wife, who left you last week, is probably right. (Hope your wife didn't leave you.)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks. Hahaha. Well, all is well here. Hope the same for you. Thanks for the review.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks. Hahaha. Well, all is well here. Hope the same for you. Thanks for the review.

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks. Hahaha. Well, all is well here. Hope the same for you. Thanks for the review.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

I love Charlie Brown! This is fantastically funny. Well done on a brilliant write. This is superb. Well done this really made me laugh good luck in the competition my hubby is the opposite he rarely pays attention to me lol kindest and warmest regards love Meia xx

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the great review. I am glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun prompt to do. Peanuts is a fave of mine too!! Thanks again!!

Comment from Rasmine

Good

Hello,
Please don't be upset that you got a four. I never gave a poem a four, but I think you could change the last line. It doesn't show who you are really because we don't know actually who your spouse is complaining.
Good luck in the competition, but I think you should rethink the last line.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thank you.

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great image, as I am a huge
Peanuts fan.
-Good syllable count.
-I like how you senyru yourself
with creative wit.
-The last line is very good
and gets the point across well!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the great review. This was a fun prompt to write.

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the great review. This was a fun prompt to write.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Feb-2018

You are very welcome.

Comment from fayesh

Excellent

I like this senryu, especially the reaffirmation that the attention deficit does indeed exist in the last line. Nice ironic twist. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks for the good review and comments. This was a fun prompt to write.

Comment from Shawlyn

Excellent

I like the words as I think they apply to most couples (my wife and I). The picture you have used is particularly apt. Well done. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks for the good review and comments. This was a fun prompt!

Comment from Violet WolfChild

Excellent

Oh gosh, that caused a jolly little chuckle. Proof that even the smallest creation can have a major impact. A wonderful little piece you have here. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the good review. This was a fun one to do.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahaha, How can we women not relate to this one!! I love it. You've just said it, spot on. I'll bet you, a lot will be nodding in agreement to this one. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks so much! I appreciate your comments. Lol

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

oh I know some just like this....oh I hear every word
you are saying...now what did you say...very well written...
I love your poem...and love your picture...love xxoo

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you. It was a fun prompt to write about. I love Schultz?s Peanuts!

reply by l.raven on 05-Feb-2018

so do I...and you are so welcome...xxoo love

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Senryu. You just prove your spouse have a valid point, you surely doesn't pay any attention of what she tells you and causing many misunderstandings. Lol.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks. I appreciate the good review.