Give me a break!
a contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an unusual write and is it Trump who has writer's block here? I think you are saying he is misguided and self promoting and can't spell either, anyway I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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This is an unusual write and is it Trump who has writer's block here? I think you are saying he is misguided and self promoting and can't spell either, anyway I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hello Dolly, thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from poetwatch
It is good but it doesn't meet the 5-7-5. The last line spread the "It's" to "It is" and then it is right. I know what you mean though, seeing that jenius give me writer's block. It would be censored all the way.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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It is good but it doesn't meet the 5-7-5. The last line spread the "It's" to "It is" and then it is right. I know what you mean though, seeing that jenius give me writer's block. It would be censored all the way.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hello my friend, I thank you for your visit and the kind review. I checked your suggestion and learned that "it's" is counted as one syllable; again, thank you kindly.
