Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 addressing writer's block, A Useless Muse, has the correct format and seem to imply that the writer has had his limit and needs to 'sleep it back on'. Funny.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks Bill, for your supportive review and great comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 porn about writer's block. It seems to have a mind of its own and knows when we are in urgent need of their expertise and then refuse to help us out until we fall asleep to get some rest.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks so much Sandra for your great comments, and review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Cycler

Excellent

Wow, very true. It is all about the muse! When we are stuck with craziness, what is left. Minds are a whirl and no words twirl in our minds. Yes, indeed!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks, for these great comments and review.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

LOL - alright, so what you are saying, author, is when the muse overloads on the use of words, he just comes off sounding silly. (Or one could say, "Brevity equals brilliance", yes? LOL) But isn't the prompt that the muse is STUCK for words?

Best of luck in the booth.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks for the review dawn, you're a brick, (a good thing)

reply by Dawn Munro on 04-Feb-2018

:)) Thank you. :)) (May I be a pet rock instead? LOL)

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Hah Hah, my muse really is not a bad bloke.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
"Verbose Intoxication!" What a marvelous phrase! One that will last in my memory for a very long time! Your offering is witty and well-crafted!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks Doane, for these lovely comments and great review.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks Sharon,for these lovely comments and great review

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about your muse and writers block. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks Teri, for these lovely comments and review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Too many words? Usually it is too few words that causes writer's block but I suppose your muse has blown a fuse, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks Dolly for these lovely comments,

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks whither verbosity, there is no useful muse for writing, state of insanity of mind; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks,, for these lovely comments and review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your musing about writer's block--pun intended! Your use of "verbose" intoxication" and rhyme in this 5-7-5 is very effective. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks Joan, for these lovely comments and review.