Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is an unusual write and the artwork is perfect for your words here, a pyramid of nothingness! Great words and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Well spoken. Looks like many writers who throw away a lot of crumbled paper and thoughts before they can come up with what they really want to see. That photo is so cute and amusing. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and well written 5-7-5 poem for the Writers Block contest. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables.
Writers will relate to the crumpled paper
Not sure about "monmument" [monument] or [monmusement]
Hard to alter embedded work
Good luck in the contest
RS


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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018

Errggghhh. YES, it is. LOL But, thank you for catching that anyway. DUH. I must be blind.

Hope it works NOW. :))