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In Memoriam

5-7-5 Contest Entry

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Comment from krys123
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Cheers Michael;
-I can see why this won as it is brilliantly composed, artistically created, and metaphorically And masterfully written to where this poem captures and displays witticism and ingenious cleverness.
-Thank you for sharing this and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

Comment from Catherine Dougherty
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Congratulations! Very well done. Believe that all is for something, however, I know I've felt like this many times. Good thing we have computers now. All those trees are spared. The presentation of this is perfect.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

Comment from Joy Graham
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Congratulations on taking first place in this contest. I somehow missed your entry. I found a few, but I guess I wasn't on top of things. This is so true, all those crumpled papers really are a pile of nothingness. Well said with a great aha moment.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5 addressing writer's block, In Memorium, has the correct format and has a humorous take on that dried up feeling when ideas and supplies for them are in short quantity. Funny.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

Comment from Cycler
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Nicely said. The empty page is due to muse ... and so you honor them that way. I like the crumpled paper ... very effective. Muse monument is very clever too. Nice work

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I see you found your way into my office. This is funny. It should do very well in the contest. I never win, but it's fun to try. I get to stretch my wings and write a different style.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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This is a very clever 5-7-5! So very creative. Perfect pairing of picture and poem, and excellent alliteration. Good luck in the contest with this winner of a poem! ~~ Connie

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from tfawcus
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An amusing epitaph and a fitting end for the indolent muse to be buried in a pyramid of papyrus. No doubt this accounts for the smile on the dial of the inscrutible sphynx.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a 5-7-5 Writer's Block Poetry Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

Comment from gloria ...
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Haaaaaa, I've reviewed a few of these writer's blocks tonight, and they are great, good fun. A pyramid of nothingness. lol. Now that's funny. Isn't it wonderful how computers have made us use even more paper.

Best of luck to you in the contest. This makes perfect sense to me.

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018