Not A-Mus-ing
Writers Block Contest : 5-7-58 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 addressing writer's block, Not Amusing, has the correct format and makes me think that "Amusing we will go, Amusing we will go, Hi Ho a derry oh, yadda yadda yadda
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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This 5-7-5 addressing writer's block, Not Amusing, has the correct format and makes me think that "Amusing we will go, Amusing we will go, Hi Ho a derry oh, yadda yadda yadda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill, Thanks for your review and Hi Ho the Derry Oh, Amusing we will go but not this time LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Cycler
I love your title. And the body of your poem is great and realistic. I guess that is what happens when the words don't come. Probably should have a contest for when they do after a draught ... that would be intriguing
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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I love your title. And the body of your poem is great and realistic. I guess that is what happens when the words don't come. Probably should have a contest for when they do after a draught ... that would be intriguing
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your review and ues it would be intriguing and fun Cheers Christine
Comment from poetwatch
Cool I know the feeling of being alone. My love, my heart, my muse, had taken a vacation. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. A good image does not hurt.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Cool I know the feeling of being alone. My love, my heart, my muse, had taken a vacation. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. A good image does not hurt.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Ho poetwatch, thanks for reading my poem for this contest Cheers Christine
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Writer's Block 5-7-5. You also used very good imagery with the great art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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This is a very well written and cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Writer's Block 5-7-5. You also used very good imagery with the great art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hi Teri, Thanks for reading this and yes I liked the image seemed to fit Cheers
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in you few, well chosen words. The picture is a blast.
Good luck to you with this in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in you few, well chosen words. The picture is a blast.
Good luck to you with this in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hi Sharon, Thanks for your review and ai found the Image quite amusing LOL Cheers
Comment from mermaids
I think most of us can relate to your words. I like the last line "Muse has gone away". Often I think my muse ahs gone away. Excellent 5-7-5 form and best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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I think most of us can relate to your words. I like the last line "Muse has gone away". Often I think my muse ahs gone away. Excellent 5-7-5 form and best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hi Mermaids Thanks very much for your review sometime it does for a while Cheers
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Your picture made me laugh out loud. That's exactly how I look when my brain dribbles out my ears.
Current fashion is not to capitalize the first word in a line if the poem has no punctuation. And short poems like these are seldom punctuated. In any case, if you're going to use capitals and a question mark, you should properly punctuate the rest.
In any case, your syllable counts are correct and you've written to the spirit of the subject. Best of luck! :) Nancy
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Your picture made me laugh out loud. That's exactly how I look when my brain dribbles out my ears.
Current fashion is not to capitalize the first word in a line if the poem has no punctuation. And short poems like these are seldom punctuated. In any case, if you're going to use capitals and a question mark, you should properly punctuate the rest.
In any case, your syllable counts are correct and you've written to the spirit of the subject. Best of luck! :) Nancy
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Hi Nancy ,Thanks for your review and I have made some punctuation changes LOL Cheers
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Hi Nancy ,Thanks for your review and I have made some punctuation changes LOL Cheers
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Glad to help. Good luck.
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Thanks
Comment from writerjen
Isn't this the truth? I can identify with this poor monkey! Clever Writer's Block 5-7-5 contest. I've written about writer's block myself, such a funny theme but since writer's generally experience it, it does make a great subject. Great humor, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Isn't this the truth? I can identify with this poor monkey! Clever Writer's Block 5-7-5 contest. I've written about writer's block myself, such a funny theme but since writer's generally experience it, it does make a great subject. Great humor, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Hi writerjen, Thanks for your review and yes I am sure we all have a monkey on our back at times LOL Cheers
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Hi writerjen, Thanks for your review and yes I am sure we all have a monkey on our back at times LOL Cheers
