The Sweetest Kiss
When your soulmate comes along12 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
he minister bid us to clasped hands as we shared our vows. After our promises, the sweet kiss we shared in that tiny church was the best time of my life. It is a memory that has lasted for thirty-two years with the promise of many years of remembrance to come.' So sweet and heartwarming this brought tears to my eyes. So beautiful and romantic. I love this true story and hope it does well in the competition it is wonderful. Well done kindest and warmest wishes love Meia xx
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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he minister bid us to clasped hands as we shared our vows. After our promises, the sweet kiss we shared in that tiny church was the best time of my life. It is a memory that has lasted for thirty-two years with the promise of many years of remembrance to come.' So sweet and heartwarming this brought tears to my eyes. So beautiful and romantic. I love this true story and hope it does well in the competition it is wonderful. Well done kindest and warmest wishes love Meia xx
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good story for the contest.
Well told.
A couple of glitches, maybe?
remembering the old 'saw' - 'saying'?
bid us to 'clasped' hands - 'clasp'
Otherwise, well done.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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This is a good story for the contest.
Well told.
A couple of glitches, maybe?
remembering the old 'saw' - 'saying'?
bid us to 'clasped' hands - 'clasp'
Otherwise, well done.
Sharon
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Sharon, for read, review and the catches. I will edit.
