Comment from Dumbledor

Excellent

A lovely innocent poem, saying a lot with so little words. Maybe the innocence of baby sleep is what we all need to re -find.Nice Insightful verse with a nice image of innocence

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for the great review,

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful Tetractys poem you have penned for the contest. Very good descriptive words and lovely picture of the beautiful baby. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018

Thanks dear Teri for your great review.

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

An excellent thought, and a very wise one too.

I love the use of an unanswered question in a poem, an great way to engage the reader.

Great job, I liked this a lot. Best of luck in the contest.

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks James fot this fpgreat review,

Comment from MaryAnnie

Excellent

Now that is a great Tetractys poem, and you pose a wise question. I think you have to experience both to consider forming an answer. I love the contrast...and the seeming simplicity of the poem. Well done. Good luck!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks MaryAnnie, for these great comments,

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

THIS IS NOT JUST A GLORIOUS POEM, SCULPTED IN THE DIFFICULT TETRACTYS SCHEME, BUT GIVEN ADDED ADORABLE AFFINITY IN THE PHOTO OF YOUR GRAND DAUGHTER. BLESSINGS ON YOU BOTH, JOHN

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks John For your great review and comments,

Comment from MelB

Excellent

What a cute picture of your granddaughter! There's something so sweet and peaceful about watching a baby sleep. A very nice poem with spot on syllable count.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks Mel, for your great review and comments

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This tetractys poem, Where, is set up correctly and ponders wisdom. What keeps a baby asleep, I hope, is the continued planning for a safe and worthwhile experience in life. I'm guessing it leans more towards milk and more sleep.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks Bill, for your great review and comments,

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

You can lose wisdom in a cavern deep but can always find peace, love and wisdom
in a baby's sleep.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks Joan, for these lovely comments and great review.

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Feb-2018

No problem.

Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a metaphoric message on accessibility of wisdom; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks, for these lovely comments and great review

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Very good contest entry with the correct syllable count. I like the cute baby picture, and I think the answer is Both. Wisdom can be learned anywhere if you are open to learning.Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thanks, For the great comments and review.