We Hold These Truths
Lest we forget...15 total reviews
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Excellent, really strong poem, and a superb use of the form.
I would dream to suggest anything, here, you've done a fantastic job.
Best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Excellent, really strong poem, and a superb use of the form.
I would dream to suggest anything, here, you've done a fantastic job.
Best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hi James,
Really late here thanking you for this kind review!
But I appreciate your thoughtful words!
diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love these words and agree with them, these Tetractys poems are little gems and I enjoyed your contribution, I wish you luck with this contest, well chosen words here and your poem has something important to say, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Love these words and agree with them, these Tetractys poems are little gems and I enjoyed your contribution, I wish you luck with this contest, well chosen words here and your poem has something important to say, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello Dolly!
I am so late responding to your review!
Thank you ever so much; to my amazement, it won the contest!
Take Care,
diane
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Well done Diane, well deserved, love Dolly x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-A good topic and message in
your poem.
-We should always take care to
protect our beliefs, rights, etc.
-A good entry; good luck.
-You might want to re-consider
the identifying marks, as I am
not sure they are allowed in a contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-A good topic and message in
your poem.
-We should always take care to
protect our beliefs, rights, etc.
-A good entry; good luck.
-You might want to re-consider
the identifying marks, as I am
not sure they are allowed in a contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello Pam!
Thank you for your encouraging review!
diane
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You are very welcome, Diane. Congratulations on the win! A deserving poem.
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very good tetractys poem and a good entry for the contest. The message that it portrays is so true and you have chosen a very apt illustration.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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This is a very good tetractys poem and a good entry for the contest. The message that it portrays is so true and you have chosen a very apt illustration.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello jenintorre!
Thank you for your complimentary review!
Very appreciated!
diane
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Tetractys Poem' writing prompt.
Well said in your few words. Your meaning is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Tetractys Poem' writing prompt.
Well said in your few words. Your meaning is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello Sharon!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
