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Fighting racism

1-6-1 poetry contest

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-six-one poem, Fighting Racism, has the eight syllables set up right and asks that everyone look for the good in others and stopped letting inbred biases determine our future.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you again dear friends for the truly humbling reviews! i am sorry i have to cut and paste but i have let to many reviews unreplied.. i am so very grateful for all your help, support and uplifting commentaries! blessings to all and a hearty squeeze!
    rebekka x
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the prompt. However I counted it I got 8 syllables one way and five the other. If it is supposed to be 1-6-1 you might want to check it. You used great words with great imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    thank you dear teri for the kind review! i think you have miscounted it because i get 1-6-1. Anyhoo, blessings and a huge hug!
Comment from Dan Diego
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This 1-6-1 has a poster-like feel to it because the message is so important. I am reviewing this in the blind, but I am not blind to the problems we face in society today. Your poem is your vision and needs to be shared. Thanks for posting. Excellent 1-6-1. Good luck in the booth. The graphic is pretty cool on its own.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    thank you dear dan for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty squeeze!