Hidden Blossoms
A Spiritual Awakening5 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
This is so lovely. I can see the images you describe quite clearly in my mind. I can see the flower petals, feel their softness, and even detect a hint of that lucious smell....
If your spiritual life is anywhere as beautiful as your poetry, I think you're safe.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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This is so lovely. I can see the images you describe quite clearly in my mind. I can see the flower petals, feel their softness, and even detect a hint of that lucious smell....
If your spiritual life is anywhere as beautiful as your poetry, I think you're safe.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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That's such a beautiful response. Thank you so much for your review. I have to feel my poems and most are spiritual. I'm glad you felt it too!
Comment from TPAC
I don' t see nothing wrong here, wonderful coherent line structuring, items connecting in a smooth flow expressed perfectly. Of course, this is in my opinion of this write.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I don' t see nothing wrong here, wonderful coherent line structuring, items connecting in a smooth flow expressed perfectly. Of course, this is in my opinion of this write.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This means so much. Thank you! Of course, the words came on their own. I was just the transcriber. Bless you!
Comment from Commando
An 'AWESOME' Free Verse presentation--Mystery writer! The message I get here is 'CRYSTAL CLEAR'. The artwork by, ande500 is most impressive and it adds exuberance to your writing. The authors note, is commendable and soul gratifying. Are you listening? Please, "Keep your quill wet with ink and your creative mind--creating!" Best wishes for a win in the contest--I'm waiting in the voting booth!
XX Bill
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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An 'AWESOME' Free Verse presentation--Mystery writer! The message I get here is 'CRYSTAL CLEAR'. The artwork by, ande500 is most impressive and it adds exuberance to your writing. The authors note, is commendable and soul gratifying. Are you listening? Please, "Keep your quill wet with ink and your creative mind--creating!" Best wishes for a win in the contest--I'm waiting in the voting booth!
XX Bill
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Yes, kudos to ande500 for the artwork. I was thrilled to connect it with my poem, Awww...thank you for this review and rating. I'm honored. It's a pleasure sharing this. I'm listening... can't help but keep writing. Glad you enjoyed it.
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"Beat the drum, clash the cymbals--and keep on a-marching!" There's a blue moon tonight--what an awesome site. "The Hidden Blossoms are glowing--like a firefly in the night!" Thanks for sharing. XX Bill
Comment from SLMorrical
I found it interesting, and I can see the spiritual imaginary. I understand how as individuals mature each year older is like the beginning of learning and experiencing life and self.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I found it interesting, and I can see the spiritual imaginary. I understand how as individuals mature each year older is like the beginning of learning and experiencing life and self.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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And then we pass it down to those that come later. Thank you so much. Means a lot to me to be able to share it.
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of the flower and how she is reborn after dropping her petals. Excellent free verse form that captures a good feeling and creates vivid images with meaning.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I like the image of the flower and how she is reborn after dropping her petals. Excellent free verse form that captures a good feeling and creates vivid images with meaning.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I so glad you enjoyed it.
