What a Mess
rhyming poem4 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Hey, did they pick my art for a contest? This is the second one that I read with my picture. Well, it's removed because I owe Tom money -- blah -- it's always money. So, maybe you need to pick another photo or the site does.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Hey, did they pick my art for a contest? This is the second one that I read with my picture. Well, it's removed because I owe Tom money -- blah -- it's always money. So, maybe you need to pick another photo or the site does.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Dear Rasmine, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from angel123
I like your subject and your poem flows greatly. It rhymes well and I like your message. Your poem is light and simple and I think that's why it flows, so well, not too serious. Your artwork goes well with your message. This is really a six stars poem. I used them all for this week. Best wishes! Keep writing.
angel123
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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I like your subject and your poem flows greatly. It rhymes well and I like your message. Your poem is light and simple and I think that's why it flows, so well, not too serious. Your artwork goes well with your message. This is really a six stars poem. I used them all for this week. Best wishes! Keep writing.
angel123
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Dear angel, Thank you for your review and comments and your virtual six stars.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a right a mess writing contest prompt which in themes was imagery flood well-read well no grammar issues check the object of contents were both excellent strip two measures for me please thanks for this and good luck in the contest talk to Ricky
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This is a right a mess writing contest prompt which in themes was imagery flood well-read well no grammar issues check the object of contents were both excellent strip two measures for me please thanks for this and good luck in the contest talk to Ricky
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Dear Ricky, Thank you for your comments and reviews.
Comment from Fabiha_N
I love this poem, it's very well-written! This entire poem is engaging from beginning to end, and it matches the theme really well too. I feel the same way, sometimes, I don't like things to be too neat. It's more relaxing to be around a messy room! Great job, this is a good entry for the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I love this poem, it's very well-written! This entire poem is engaging from beginning to end, and it matches the theme really well too. I feel the same way, sometimes, I don't like things to be too neat. It's more relaxing to be around a messy room! Great job, this is a good entry for the contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Dear Fabiha_N, Thank you for your comments and review.
