Comment from Gracie619

Excellent

A very well written and fluid piece on a very important matter. Just what would things be like, and yes, I wonder too how the world will really end. Thank you for sharing this piece that gives many a lot to think about. Take care.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Gracie, for this fine review, and comments.

Comment from estory

Excellent

I think this little poem speaks of the frustrations we all feel sometimes, waiting for redemption, for the transformation of sinners into saints.. What did John Mayer sing? Waiting for the world to change. We seem to have been waiting for a really long time. And we start to wonder, no matter how much faith we have, when are things going to get better? I think the closing image was hopeful, yet there is a tinge of doubt there, can the featherlight wings hold us? I think you speak of things we all feel sometimes. estory

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much, for this fine review, and comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I liked this write and it asks a serious question, if only there was an answer, there is so much hate in the world just now, a poignant write, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Dolly, for this fine review, and comments.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Can we depend.
on someone who (in whom) hope sings --
perhaps with healing in His wings?
I think we can as long as we remain faithful to God. He makes all possible to the faithful. We must stay strong in our beliefs. A great entry good luck love and regards Meia x

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Miea, for this fine review, and comments.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Nicely done Statement- Question entry, my friend. Very interesting thoughts to ponder on. Thanks for sharing. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Kerry, for this fine review, and comments.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 31-Jan-2018

Very welcome:)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

The world is consumed with hate, fear, and greed. It is a shame, now we have destroyed this planet, we seek others to condem as well. Good poem and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much, for this fine review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mame

Excellent

Very apt words to match picture. Great message here and splendidly conveyed. Just wondered about the rhythm as it flows superbly excep for the word 'evil' but guess that was deliberate. Well done!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Mame, for this fine review, blessings Roy

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

You ask a question we all want to have answered with a Yes. We wish we could live in a world with no hate without have to die to get to it.

Good luck in the contest.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Joan, for this fine review, blessings Roy

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Jan-2018

You are so very kindly welcome, Roy.

Joan

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

This is a difficult one to judge given the rules for the contest which state - 'Write a verse that makes a statement, then the next verse forms a question, 3rd verse goes back to the statement, 4th to question, and so on. Doesn't have to rhyme. Use as many verses as you would like - couplet, quatrain, tercet, etc.'

Given this it doesn't appear as if this meets the criteria, although the piece itself is good.

Good flow and solid rhyming.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks G, for this great review and comments,

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your meaningful poem. It is well received. It flows and rhymes well and good alliteration of w, and c, letters, and sounds. Your artwork goes well with your message. Best wishes! Keep writing.

angel123

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks Angel, for this great review and comments,