Testing my Muse
Statement/Question11 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written little story putting the muse to the test. It seems he was there somewhere inside the mix not very sure what he should do. Let you try yourself or give you a good idea
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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A very well-written little story putting the muse to the test. It seems he was there somewhere inside the mix not very sure what he should do. Let you try yourself or give you a good idea
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for readin and reviewing my muse A challenging contest so I thought this may work Cheers
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love that one! Fabulous contest entry. I'm so pleased I checked yours out, it's so much fun to read and so much like my own thoughts. Very well done and good luck in the contest!! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I love that one! Fabulous contest entry. I'm so pleased I checked yours out, it's so much fun to read and so much like my own thoughts. Very well done and good luck in the contest!! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thanks so much and pehaps this may ressonate with quite a few here.At times the words just need to be written down Cheers for your good luck
Comment from Bill Schott
This Statement-Question poem, Testing My Muse, seems to flow naturally from statement to question in each succeeding stanza. I think your muse snuck in there.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This Statement-Question poem, Testing My Muse, seems to flow naturally from statement to question in each succeeding stanza. I think your muse snuck in there.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill, Thank you for taking the time to read my contest entry I thought this may be the answer to the contest requirements LOL and tested my muse in the making Cheers
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, well, by the looks of what I've just read here in relation to the contest you've entered this delightfully well rhymed little verse in, my answer would be, "Yes, I believe you will succeed."
Best of luck to you in the contest, Anonymous Poet...
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hahaha, well, by the looks of what I've just read here in relation to the contest you've entered this delightfully well rhymed little verse in, my answer would be, "Yes, I believe you will succeed."
Best of luck to you in the contest, Anonymous Poet...
~Dean :}
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Dean, Thank you for reading and reviewing my contest entry and I thought this may work we will see LOL Cheers
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Well, you got my vote for what it's worth. :)
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Hugs and thanks much appreciated Cheers AP LOL
Comment from Dan Diego
Reviewed in the blind for contest voting. This poem is very relatable to writers everywhere. I like how your muse/narrator can't decide between freestyle, rhymes and then needs a topic. Great picture. The poem resonated with me.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Reviewed in the blind for contest voting. This poem is very relatable to writers everywhere. I like how your muse/narrator can't decide between freestyle, rhymes and then needs a topic. Great picture. The poem resonated with me.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Dan, Thanks for resding my poem for this contest and glad I hit a note with you. Personally ai like rhyme and meter and rarely do free verse but I had to ask a question and make statement a bot of fun to test the muse Cheers
Comment from Marge Setzer
I love how you structured your stanzas with your musings first and then the question at the end of each one. Very clever. I found this fun to read and was sure you would get started on your poem...but perhaps you have more musings to consider. A plight of writers and poets as well, overcoming inertia. Is there a followup? Is it necessary to have a follow up? That's for you to decide. Very little to critique except for two things for you to consider. For a smoother flow in stanza one, leave out the word "all." Capital W on Will in the last stanza. Other than that, Voila! I'm smiling. Marge
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I love how you structured your stanzas with your musings first and then the question at the end of each one. Very clever. I found this fun to read and was sure you would get started on your poem...but perhaps you have more musings to consider. A plight of writers and poets as well, overcoming inertia. Is there a followup? Is it necessary to have a follow up? That's for you to decide. Very little to critique except for two things for you to consider. For a smoother flow in stanza one, leave out the word "all." Capital W on Will in the last stanza. Other than that, Voila! I'm smiling. Marge
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hi Marge Setzer, I hope that I have made the contest requirement it was a bit hard to work out what they wanted so this is my version LOL. No follow up and ai will check out you suggestions Cheers
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It seems like your muse is on vacation, r maybe dead? This is a clever idea. It's unique and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. I guess you don't need a muse after all.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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It seems like your muse is on vacation, r maybe dead? This is a clever idea. It's unique and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. I guess you don't need a muse after all.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hi Thomas, Thanks for your review and I did stretch my muse with this one Not sure how I will go but appreciate your confidence that is may do well Cheers Christine.
Comment from Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hi Ricky, Thanks for your review This is testing my muse not sure how I will go but appreciate yoir feedback Cheers
Comment from Cindy Warren
This one gave me a smile. I never know how cooperative my muse will be. I think it has a good chance of being a winner. Good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This one gave me a smile. I never know how cooperative my muse will be. I think it has a good chance of being a winner. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Hi Cindy, Thanks for your terrific review and good luck I thought I would just tackle the challenge itself LOL Cheers
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks questions -- whether readers would like some free style prose with rhyme, offer a concept, and poet would succeed; well said, well done; DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This speaks questions -- whether readers would like some free style prose with rhyme, offer a concept, and poet would succeed; well said, well done; DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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HI DR ALCREATOR, Thanks for taking a read of my contest entry, the contest posed an interesting challenge hope I got it right with my write LOL Cheers
