Dear Elizabeth
A n emotional letter to an aging family member.15 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hey Bridgette. I had a mother in law like this and I stayed with her son for 37 years. thing is, when people aren't what you want them to be, I still believe if you handle yourself with respect and integrity all the wash will be washed sooner or later. It's great to know yours came sooner and before she left for good. Good luck in your contest. this is a strong entry. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Hey Bridgette. I had a mother in law like this and I stayed with her son for 37 years. thing is, when people aren't what you want them to be, I still believe if you handle yourself with respect and integrity all the wash will be washed sooner or later. It's great to know yours came sooner and before she left for good. Good luck in your contest. this is a strong entry. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and your kind comments.
This may be a silly question but indulge me, please. Are you Dean's wife?
Blessings,
Brigitte
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No sweetie. Dean and I are friends the best kind of friends. He is an encouraging brave soul and my respect for him knows no bounds! Junglefighter Bill was my first foray into love after marriage as I was married for 37 years. Bill is an amazing man but, I guess we don't jive. lol What else is new in my life, plus I think your friend Janny and Bill are an item now. I'm just me, writing and living to be free. xx deborah
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Thank you so much for this sincere and honest reply. I have been married for 49 years and am blessed, Bill is a wonderful man from the wild side. He is a good and supportive friend to me. Damn, he is good looking but looks are not everything! The vibes have to connect and maybe he has found his soulmate. Janny does not think highly of me, I can tell from reviews but that is okay. I am glad to have gotten to know a little; I love your work and style. You have a fan in me.
Have a happy writing day and be yourself!
Blessings and Happiness to you.
Brigitte
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brigitte, this was a heartfelt letter to your mother-in -law. Getting old and set in your ways is never easy on the younger generation, and I think you conveyed that very well.It's very well written and I saw no mistakes.
The only thing I can mention is that there is a formatting problem. You need more defined paragraphs:
This man, who had never been sick a day in his life, left us on the unknown journey of death. Another surgery landed you in the hospital before we executed your moving to our house. This gave us some time to arrange our household.
Dear Elizabeth, it was hard to ask our sons to move even if it was only up the road ...
Further down that paragraph you need more double spacing.
I really liked the gentleness in your writing. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Hi Brigitte, this was a heartfelt letter to your mother-in -law. Getting old and set in your ways is never easy on the younger generation, and I think you conveyed that very well.It's very well written and I saw no mistakes.
The only thing I can mention is that there is a formatting problem. You need more defined paragraphs:
This man, who had never been sick a day in his life, left us on the unknown journey of death. Another surgery landed you in the hospital before we executed your moving to our house. This gave us some time to arrange our household.
Dear Elizabeth, it was hard to ask our sons to move even if it was only up the road ...
Further down that paragraph you need more double spacing.
I really liked the gentleness in your writing. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading and the positive suggestions. Will read and edit as necessary.
With gratitude,
Brigitte
Comment from Dutchie
This is a wonderful story, Brigitte. You and your husband did a wonderful job by paying attention to your mother in law. And then comes the time you can't handle it anymore. The care becomes too heavy, I know how it feels, you think you can keep her with you till the end, but it does not Always work that way.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story where I can relate to. Fia
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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This is a wonderful story, Brigitte. You and your husband did a wonderful job by paying attention to your mother in law. And then comes the time you can't handle it anymore. The care becomes too heavy, I know how it feels, you think you can keep her with you till the end, but it does not Always work that way.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story where I can relate to. Fia
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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When a story touches a reader, it was worth posting. It was hard to share this and I debated. In the end, it has helped me to share and many readers have reactions that are re lat able.
The six stars is an honor; I feel honored and am humbled. Thank you from my heart.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You are so welcome.
Comment from D.F. Wood
I can relate to your situation as I have been through a similar situation with my Dad, who passed away this past October. I think your writing here is well done, and I did not see any errors.
I feel for you, as it is a very sad thing to go through. You love them so much, yet the burden is greater than anything you've ever done. May the Lord bless you and your family.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I can relate to your situation as I have been through a similar situation with my Dad, who passed away this past October. I think your writing here is well done, and I did not see any errors.
I feel for you, as it is a very sad thing to go through. You love them so much, yet the burden is greater than anything you've ever done. May the Lord bless you and your family.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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When writing is related to, it is worthwhile sharing. Thank you for reading and the supportive comments. My sympathy goes out to you on your loss.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from MissMerri
So beautifully written, Brigitte, I can't imagine changing any part of it. I loved how you wrote it as a letter to your mother-in-law, and yet managed to create, with your well-chosen words, such a clear picture of her, both in her youth and in her later years. I loved the tenderness of this, showing your heart and your husbands too. I loved that you included your daughter, showing how she was friend and confidante to her grandmother. What a lovely young lady she must be! All together, this made a fabulously enjoyable read. I wish you all the best in this contest. MM
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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So beautifully written, Brigitte, I can't imagine changing any part of it. I loved how you wrote it as a letter to your mother-in-law, and yet managed to create, with your well-chosen words, such a clear picture of her, both in her youth and in her later years. I loved the tenderness of this, showing your heart and your husbands too. I loved that you included your daughter, showing how she was friend and confidante to her grandmother. What a lovely young lady she must be! All together, this made a fabulously enjoyable read. I wish you all the best in this contest. MM
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I am awed by your complimentary review. It did come from the heart and helped me express what I couldn't voice. Everything in life depends on love, give and take, and faith. I thank you for this review from the bottom of my humbled heart.
A writer, master of the craft, YOU ,have honored me!
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from smileycloud
very beautiful story
the good and the bad of this life you and your family have handled very well indeed
blessings to you all
you promise to God was kept to the degree that was possible without professional care
God knows your hearts and He is with her for you and with you for your loving kindness
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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very beautiful story
the good and the bad of this life you and your family have handled very well indeed
blessings to you all
you promise to God was kept to the degree that was possible without professional care
God knows your hearts and He is with her for you and with you for your loving kindness
have a smiley day
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you for these gentle and kind comments. This was not hard to write BUT difficult to share.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Sherman541
Very sincerely written, filled with emotions, memories and love for a person who has lived a very long, full and happy life. I can so relate to this story. I am very happy that you wrote about this it will help you a lot. Very, very nicely written. Sherman541
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Very sincerely written, filled with emotions, memories and love for a person who has lived a very long, full and happy life. I can so relate to this story. I am very happy that you wrote about this it will help you a lot. Very, very nicely written. Sherman541
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading. I am always happy when readers can relate. This was not hard to write BUT difficult to share.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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you are most welcome and yes I understand, I just wrote a poem called Sorrow, I wish we could just read something like this and our sorrow would melt away. Perhaps you might enjoy it. Sherman541
Comment from MelB
Hi Brigitte, what a beautiful letter you wrote. It can be hard to take care of others, especially when they are demanding and in and out of their mind and good health. I'm sure she was pleased and more importantly, God was.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hi Brigitte, what a beautiful letter you wrote. It can be hard to take care of others, especially when they are demanding and in and out of their mind and good health. I'm sure she was pleased and more importantly, God was.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you dear friend.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a clear, emotional and real story, now daughter-in-law is aged, there is no confusion in her and in mother-in-law, all death of family members was accidental, and one should fulfil a promise made before God whatever so happens; well said, well done; wish good luck to you for the contest; keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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This is a clear, emotional and real story, now daughter-in-law is aged, there is no confusion in her and in mother-in-law, all death of family members was accidental, and one should fulfil a promise made before God whatever so happens; well said, well done; wish good luck to you for the contest; keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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You are very generous with these kind comments. This one was difficult to share not write. I will keep writing, thank you for asking me to.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Ricky1024
It's so nice to see examples where we don't trash our parents or grandparents room in nursing homes just because they got older senile dementia set in or whatever their mental problems were it's our job and obligation to take care of them the best we can and that's why God put us on Earth thanks for this well written piece talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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It's so nice to see examples where we don't trash our parents or grandparents room in nursing homes just because they got older senile dementia set in or whatever their mental problems were it's our job and obligation to take care of them the best we can and that's why God put us on Earth thanks for this well written piece talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely supportive review. It was a healing write for me. I am grateful for your time.
Have a good weekend.
Brigitte
