She Didn't Lock Her Door
missed the contest...LOL57 total reviews
Comment from Deniz22
Love your sweet story and I bet you can't lock either the door to your house or your heart when the grandchildren come a-calling! Sorry, I don't have a sixer left, you deserve it for this well told, humorous true story!
God bless you, Dennis
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Love your sweet story and I bet you can't lock either the door to your house or your heart when the grandchildren come a-calling! Sorry, I don't have a sixer left, you deserve it for this well told, humorous true story!
God bless you, Dennis
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Dennis, LOL...I do leave them unlock...but there have been those times...LOL...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and God Bless you as well...love Linda xxoo
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❤️🙏
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smiling you...xxoo
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello l.raven
Your poem makes me wish that my four grandchildren were kids again how much fun it would be to play a game
question
Why always lock the door at night
when the grand kids return
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Hello l.raven
Your poem makes me wish that my four grandchildren were kids again how much fun it would be to play a game
question
Why always lock the door at night
when the grand kids return
Gert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Hi Gert, LOL, some times I pretend I am sleeping...and tease them...thank you so much sweet girl for a wonderful review....love ya Linda xxoo
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You are welcome Linda
I wonder if they knew you not asleep
Gert
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the way they yell...I'm sure...LOL...smiling..xxoo
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Well I miss that fun, now waiting for great grand children before I kick the bucket.
Gert
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my mother has 14 greats...scary...LOL
Comment from BeasPeas
So clever. This is a great write. Visits with the grandkids seem to be more challenging as we grow older. They have energy to burn. We did it all when we were younger. Your poem flows well and is humorous. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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So clever. This is a great write. Visits with the grandkids seem to be more challenging as we grow older. They have energy to burn. We did it all when we were younger. Your poem flows well and is humorous. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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HI Marilyn, thank you so much for going back and reading my poem...yes I wish I could bottle their energy...use it as needed...LOL...thank you for a great review sweet girl...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dutchie
So cute this poem Linda. We are not used to little children anymore. That's what they do...LOL. Loved this poem with nice rhyme and flow. Love Fia xxx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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So cute this poem Linda. We are not used to little children anymore. That's what they do...LOL. Loved this poem with nice rhyme and flow. Love Fia xxx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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HI Fia, I don't see mine like I used to...but they are growing up...sigh...thank you so very much for a great review...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
Hey! Just caught up with your poem. Great photo to compliment your real-time poem. What are grandmothers for? Dedicated baby sitters or just simply quitters. She probably was watcher her favourite soapie when the doors burst open and all peace was broken! Love it XXK.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Hey! Just caught up with your poem. Great photo to compliment your real-time poem. What are grandmothers for? Dedicated baby sitters or just simply quitters. She probably was watcher her favourite soapie when the doors burst open and all peace was broken! Love it XXK.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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HI Kace, LOL...doesn't matter...they never knock...not the little ones...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review Sweetie Pie...love you...xxoo
Comment from clsandau
A great little poem and even more special is that fact you can laugh at yourself over your "little" mistake :) Great set up and rhyming too. Your work is always so good and we just never know what to expect do we? Sorry, can't say good luck in the contest - cause there isn't one!!! Carol
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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A great little poem and even more special is that fact you can laugh at yourself over your "little" mistake :) Great set up and rhyming too. Your work is always so good and we just never know what to expect do we? Sorry, can't say good luck in the contest - cause there isn't one!!! Carol
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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HI Carol, LOL...it was funny...thank you so much for a wonderful review my friend...and the smile...love Linda xxoo
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you are welcome - I enjoyed!
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smiling big...xxoo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
My nephews don't care where you are. They will find you if they can get in. It's a love that you will always remember though. I'm glad you posted this contest or no contest. Great job
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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My nephews don't care where you are. They will find you if they can get in. It's a love that you will always remember though. I'm glad you posted this contest or no contest. Great job
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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HI Meghan, so good to see you my sweet friend...that is so true...they find you no matter what...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from rjuselius
Hahaha. Lol. This is an amusing piece of poetry dear linda! I love the final statement as it is so true just concerning my parents. Indeed. Funny.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hahaha. Lol. This is an amusing piece of poetry dear linda! I love the final statement as it is so true just concerning my parents. Indeed. Funny.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hi Rebekka, thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and you are so very welcome...Blessings and big hugs back to you as well....love you....Linda xxoo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love it and can relate. Love the artwork it suits the poem. Sorry you missed the contest, thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your poems
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I love it and can relate. Love the artwork it suits the poem. Sorry you missed the contest, thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your poems
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hi Jeff, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ken the Carpenter
I would have given you the 5 stars but as you said you were about 915 words short but when it comes to the grandkids the door is always open anyway, life is to short to worry about a few words and love the moment. Love those grandkids. :)
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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I would have given you the 5 stars but as you said you were about 915 words short but when it comes to the grandkids the door is always open anyway, life is to short to worry about a few words and love the moment. Love those grandkids. :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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your review makes no sense...It would have been short if I posted it that way...it just went in as a poem...as it should have...so it was never short when posted...thank you
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sorry i was just messing with your comment before the poem
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you low stared it because it was short words...but it wasn't...went in as a short poem...that's what it is...thank you
