Trumping the System
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Comment from Ulla
Wow this was an enlightening read, and it will be well worth publishing. I can also see why you think this would be the Epilogue of the book as it wraps it all up. Very well written. Yes, I would be interested to reading on. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Wow this was an enlightening read, and it will be well worth publishing. I can also see why you think this would be the Epilogue of the book as it wraps it all up. Very well written. Yes, I would be interested to reading on. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Many thanks. If you would like a first draft in Word or PDF format, let me know...John
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I would prefer word format.
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I need an email
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Okay. I'll PM you. :)
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Wow. This enlightening work was a difficult read for early Sunday morning. It is a well written educating piece worthy of publication. The common goal of humans is meaningful communication and selfless commitment to humanity. I was educated through this and would love to continue reading. Please, this epilogue is only the beginning, add to it chapter by chapter. It is commendable and relevant. I am a fan and will follow and help promote.
I noticed a couple of typos: see below
"Slice and Dice works exactly as the human decision process.Quotation mark missing.
There were group meetings as well to discuss our feelings and interact about our shared experiences. commas needed?
Keep writing!
Have a productive journey to continue this work.
Brigitte
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Wow. This enlightening work was a difficult read for early Sunday morning. It is a well written educating piece worthy of publication. The common goal of humans is meaningful communication and selfless commitment to humanity. I was educated through this and would love to continue reading. Please, this epilogue is only the beginning, add to it chapter by chapter. It is commendable and relevant. I am a fan and will follow and help promote.
I noticed a couple of typos: see below
"Slice and Dice works exactly as the human decision process.Quotation mark missing.
There were group meetings as well to discuss our feelings and interact about our shared experiences. commas needed?
Keep writing!
Have a productive journey to continue this work.
Brigitte
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Many thanks. If you would like a first draft in Word or PDF format, let me know...John
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
We receive all communication through our five physical senses. The communication is felt through vibrations that carry both frequency and amplitude. The vibrations created by these words are felt by your eyes and interpreted as the image I want you to contemplate. Your brain has two hemispheres. The left interprets frequency of vibrations and the right, dimension of amplitude. If I have verbally painted the image I have in my mind properly, you will build that image in yours. We will have successfully communicated.' This made a lot of sense to me. Reading your work is INTENSE I would love to have a conversation with you because I find people shy away from talking about all of this. But it fascinates me and I love reading your thoughts on the world. Ipso facto, I think they are correct. Kindest regards and well done again love and regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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We receive all communication through our five physical senses. The communication is felt through vibrations that carry both frequency and amplitude. The vibrations created by these words are felt by your eyes and interpreted as the image I want you to contemplate. Your brain has two hemispheres. The left interprets frequency of vibrations and the right, dimension of amplitude. If I have verbally painted the image I have in my mind properly, you will build that image in yours. We will have successfully communicated.' This made a lot of sense to me. Reading your work is INTENSE I would love to have a conversation with you because I find people shy away from talking about all of this. But it fascinates me and I love reading your thoughts on the world. Ipso facto, I think they are correct. Kindest regards and well done again love and regards Meia :)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Would you like a rough draft of the book in Word format?
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is interesting stuff. I'll have to read through it a couple of times to fully understand it (maybe?).
Well done. I enjoy your style of writing as well as the information you put forth here.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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This is interesting stuff. I'll have to read through it a couple of times to fully understand it (maybe?).
Well done. I enjoy your style of writing as well as the information you put forth here.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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It makes more sense if you read the book
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, John;
This is a fascinating part of the book. I liked the explanation of how Cogitator came to be, and the glossary included in this piece.
The writing is clear and concise, and the reader gets a very good education in this process.
Thank you for sharing this exceptional piece of writing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Hi, John;
This is a fascinating part of the book. I liked the explanation of how Cogitator came to be, and the glossary included in this piece.
The writing is clear and concise, and the reader gets a very good education in this process.
Thank you for sharing this exceptional piece of writing,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Many thanks for the encouraging words and great review...John
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Cogitator: you bring up many great points. Congrats on winning the
spelling bee. You desired to learn and focused on the event. It was fun
for you. Congrats again on the mountain climb without using foot holds.
I think many people are searching for meaning, life, what to do. Did you
like Wilson Learning? What a great company.
We went to Santa Fe and Taos for our honeymoon. I saw that it was a wonderful
artsy place with terrific food and sunsets. Yes, outstanding and beautiful.
I think it is wonderful to learn together and mentor people. I try to encourage.
My daughter helps youth with autism as a therapist. She's trying to figure out
her life. Blessings to you. Continue the book. I will share with Monica.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Cogitator: you bring up many great points. Congrats on winning the
spelling bee. You desired to learn and focused on the event. It was fun
for you. Congrats again on the mountain climb without using foot holds.
I think many people are searching for meaning, life, what to do. Did you
like Wilson Learning? What a great company.
We went to Santa Fe and Taos for our honeymoon. I saw that it was a wonderful
artsy place with terrific food and sunsets. Yes, outstanding and beautiful.
I think it is wonderful to learn together and mentor people. I try to encourage.
My daughter helps youth with autism as a therapist. She's trying to figure out
her life. Blessings to you. Continue the book. I will share with Monica.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018
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Thank you ...John
Comment from CSChollie
Lots of deep thinking, Cogitator. Thank you for sharing this well-written essay or is it part of a book? I wasn't sure. There are a lot of ideas that have opened my mind to contemplation and research. Having said that, I actually agree with many of your conclusions. I'm going to check out "Essays for Seekers" and watch for more of your writing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Lots of deep thinking, Cogitator. Thank you for sharing this well-written essay or is it part of a book? I wasn't sure. There are a lot of ideas that have opened my mind to contemplation and research. Having said that, I actually agree with many of your conclusions. I'm going to check out "Essays for Seekers" and watch for more of your writing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Thank you...John
Comment from Ricky1024
Utopian tool races while reading rich and seem as well as imagery it flowed well when it read well with no grammar issue so to speak it was scripted measures were firmly in place an excellent ejective an object of contents were also excellent thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Utopian tool races while reading rich and seem as well as imagery it flowed well when it read well with no grammar issue so to speak it was scripted measures were firmly in place an excellent ejective an object of contents were also excellent thanks for just talked to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Thanks
Comment from Rajah2u
Wow what powerful and useful, usable information. You are a very bright mind my friend. Give everyone the treat of your book. Very high praise I give to you. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Wow what powerful and useful, usable information. You are a very bright mind my friend. Give everyone the treat of your book. Very high praise I give to you. Excellent work.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Many thanks for your review...John
Comment from c_lucas
One must learn to love himself before he can learn to love another. I agree that we are the creators of our own reality. It is best to learn how to please yourself before you can please another.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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One must learn to love himself before he can learn to love another. I agree that we are the creators of our own reality. It is best to learn how to please yourself before you can please another.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Thanks Charlie...John
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You're welcome, John. Charlie
